[IPP] Updated draft of IPP Enterprise Printing Extensions v2.0 posted for review

[Kennedy, Smith (Wireless & IPP Standards)]

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Smith

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    Smith Kennedy
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> On Aug 15, 2020, at 7:39 AM, Kennedy, Smith (Wireless & IPP Standards) via ipp <ipp at pwg.org> wrote:
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> Greetings,
> 
> I have posted an updated draft of IPP Enterprise Printing Extensions v2.0 for review next week:
> 
> https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippepx20-20200813.pdf <https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippepx20-20200813.pdf>
> https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippepx20-20200813.docx <https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippepx20-20200813.docx>
> https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippepx20-20200813-rev.pdf <https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippepx20-20200813-rev.pdf>
> https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippepx20-20200813-rev.docx <https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippepx20-20200813-rev.docx>
> 
> Changes include:
> Renamed and simplified the "proof-and-hold" collection to become "proof-copies" (integer(1:MAX));
> Refactored sections 4.4 and 4.5 to now be sub-sections of a new 4.4 "Proof Printing". Also renamed "Proof and Hold" to be "Job Proof and Suspend" and restored "Job Proof Print" as the feature name from the original 5100.11-2010.
> Removed the "Feature Interoperability" sub-section of section 4 and instead distributed the points to other relevant areas of the document;
> Updated language for "parent-job-id" and "parent-job-uuid" as per minutes. Also added a new subsection in section 7 to state that a Printer implementing the Resubmit-Job operation is required to add these attributes to the new copy of the Job;
> Moved the tables listing the standard keywords to the section defining the Job Template attribute or operation attribute, not the Printer Description attribute ("xxx- supported") and added a note in the new PWG document style policy draft;
> Added definitions for Control Console and End User and simplified the definition of Password Release Job;
> Clarified and expanded the definition of the Job Release feature;
> Extensively rewrote the definition of the Job Storage feature;
> Added minor clarifications to the Get-User-Printer-Attributes operation definition;
> Moved the portions of the "job-password" and "job-password-encryption" definitions concerning printer processing to new Job Status attribute definitions, since that is really where such discussion belongs;
> Clarified the definition of the "job-cancel-after" attribute;
> Fixed the table formatting for the "job-password-encryption-supported" keyword listing;
> Updated keywords for "ipp-features-supported" to specify keywords for all conceptual features defined in this draft;
> Updated Conformance Requirements and IANA Considerations; and
> Fixed many instances of passive voice and other issues once the grammar checker had additional checking criteria enabled.
> Cheers,
> 
> Smith
> 
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>     Smith Kennedy
>     HP Inc.
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