Greetings,
Following the review at the recent F2F of the IPP Enterprise Printing Extensions v2.0 draft posted August 15, 2020, which revealed some critical flaws, I have I believe corrected those flaws and posted a new draft, available here:
https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippepx20-20200826.docxhttps://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippepx20-20200826.pdfhttps://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippepx20-20200826-rev.docxhttps://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippepx20-20200826-rev.pdfhttps://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippepx20-20200826-rev-20200815.docxhttps://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippepx20-20200826-rev-20200815.pdf
I have included two "-rev" versions: the "-rev" are comparing this latest draft with the last fully reviewed draft published June 30, and the "-rev-20200815" are comparing this latest draft with the most recent August 15 draft. Here is a list of changes:
August 26, 2020:
Changed wording at the start of each subsection of section 4 describing a conceptual feature, because the wording in the previous draft was inappropriate given the PWG model and its actors capable of activity;
Restored the definition of "job-password" and removed the added Job Status definitions of "job-password" and "job-password-encryption" because the internal Printer / Job values are not to be defined as "hidden Job Status attributes";
Changed all uses of the word "deprecated" to "DEPRECATED" other than those uses in the IANA Considerations section;
Fixed the IANA Considerations to reflect the state of the rest of the document; and
Restructured and updated the definition of "proof-copies".
August 15, 2020:
Renamed and simplified the "proof-and-hold" collection to become "proof-copies" (integer(1:MAX));
Refactored sections 4.4 and 4.5 to now be sub-sections of a new 4.4 "Proof Printing". Also renamed "Proof and Hold" to be "Job Proof and Suspend" and restored "Job Proof Print" as the feature name from the original 5100.11-2010.
Removed the "Feature Interoperability" sub-section of section 4 and instead distributed the points to other relevant areas of the document;
Updated language for "parent-job-id" and "parent-job-uuid" as per minutes. Also added a new subsection in section 7 to state that a Printer implementing the Resubmit-Job operation is required to add these attributes to the new copy of the Job;
Moved the tables listing the standard keywords to the section defining the Job Template attribute or operation attribute, not the Printer Description attribute ("xxx-supported") and added a note in the new PWG document style policy draft;
Added definitions for Control Console and End User and simplified the definition of Password Release Job;
Clarified and expanded the definition of the Job Release feature;
Extensively rewrote the definition of the Job Storage feature;
Added minor clarifications to the Get-User-Printer-Attributes operation definition;
Moved the portions of the "job-password" and "job-password-encryption" definitions concerning printer processing to new Job Status attribute definitions, since that is really where such discussion belongs;
Clarified the definition of the "job-cancel-after" attribute;
Fixed the table formatting for the "job-password-encryption-supported" keyword listing;
Updated keywords for "ipp-features-supported" to specify keywords for all conceptual features defined in this draft;
Updated Conformance Requirements and IANA Considerations; and
Fixed many instances of passive voice and other issues once the grammar checker had additional checking criteria enabled.
Thanks to all for your patience and assistance in helping to review this important specification!
Cheers,
Smith
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Smith Kennedy
HP Inc.
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