Greetings,
I have posted an updated draft of IPP Enterprise Printing Extensions v2.0 for review next week:
https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippepx20-20200813.pdf <https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippepx20-20200813.pdf>
https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippepx20-20200813.docx <https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippepx20-20200813.docx>
https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippepx20-20200813-rev.pdf <https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippepx20-20200813-rev.pdf>
https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippepx20-20200813-rev.docx <https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippepx20-20200813-rev.docx>
Changes include:
Renamed and simplified the "proof-and-hold" collection to become "proof-copies" (integer(1:MAX));
Refactored sections 4.4 and 4.5 to now be sub-sections of a new 4.4 "Proof Printing". Also renamed "Proof and Hold" to be "Job Proof and Suspend" and restored "Job Proof Print" as the feature name from the original 5100.11-2010.
Removed the "Feature Interoperability" sub-section of section 4 and instead distributed the points to other relevant areas of the document;
Updated language for "parent-job-id" and "parent-job-uuid" as per minutes. Also added a new subsection in section 7 to state that a Printer implementing the Resubmit-Job operation is required to add these attributes to the new copy of the Job;
Moved the tables listing the standard keywords to the section defining the Job Template attribute or operation attribute, not the Printer Description attribute ("xxx- supported") and added a note in the new PWG document style policy draft;
Added definitions for Control Console and End User and simplified the definition of Password Release Job;
Clarified and expanded the definition of the Job Release feature;
Extensively rewrote the definition of the Job Storage feature;
Added minor clarifications to the Get-User-Printer-Attributes operation definition;
Moved the portions of the "job-password" and "job-password-encryption" definitions concerning printer processing to new Job Status attribute definitions, since that is really where such discussion belongs;
Clarified the definition of the "job-cancel-after" attribute;
Fixed the table formatting for the "job-password-encryption-supported" keyword listing;
Updated keywords for "ipp-features-supported" to specify keywords for all conceptual features defined in this draft;
Updated Conformance Requirements and IANA Considerations; and
Fixed many instances of passive voice and other issues once the grammar checker had additional checking criteria enabled.
Cheers,
Smith
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Smith Kennedy
HP Inc.
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