I like it!
Unless there are any other suggestions, I'm going to run with that, and post an updated document later this morning.
Smith
> On Jul 1, 2019, at 6:49 PM, Michael Sweet <msweet at msweet.org> wrote:
>> Smith,
>> Quick feedback:
>> - End initial sentence with "are to:" (add "to")?
> - Item 1: "currently defined for IPP" is awkward
> - Add "and" at the end of item 1.
> - Item 2: "Describe implementation considerations for authentication ..." (identification has already happened, you are describing the items that were identified during the development of the document)
> - Item 2: "protocol technical concerns" should read "technical protocol concerns"
>> That would make it:
>> 3.5 Design Requirements
>> The design requirements for this IPP Authentication Methods Best Practice document are to:
>> 1. Illustrate how each authentication method integrates into IPP interaction flows; and
> 2. Describe implementation considerations for authentication in general, including factors that influence user experience and technical protocol concerns.
>>> On Jul 1, 2019, at 3:20 PM, Kennedy, Smith (Wireless & Standards Architect) via ipp <ipp at pwg.org <mailto:ipp at pwg.org>> wrote:
>>>> Greetings,
>>>> From our LCRC review of IPP Authentication Methods, it was pointed out in the review that the document was lacking a "Design Requirements" subsection to section 3. We decided to post a draft here on the reflector, and once consensus was reached, to add that to the final draft to be used in the PWG Formal Vote of Approval.
>>>>>> 3.5 Design Requirements
>>>> The design requirements for this IPP Authentication Methods Best Practice document are:
>>>> 1. Illustrate how each authentication method currently defined for IPP integrates into IPP interaction flows;
>> 2. Identify and describe points to be considered in implementing Client or Printer support for authentication in general, including factors that influence user experience as well as protocol technical concerns.
>>>>>> Thoughts?
>>>> Smith
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