Smith,
Quick feedback:
- End initial sentence with "are to:" (add "to")?
- Item 1: "currently defined for IPP" is awkward
- Add "and" at the end of item 1.
- Item 2: "Describe implementation considerations for authentication ..." (identification has already happened, you are describing the items that were identified during the development of the document)
- Item 2: "protocol technical concerns" should read "technical protocol concerns"
That would make it:
3.5 Design Requirements
The design requirements for this IPP Authentication Methods Best Practice document are to:
1. Illustrate how each authentication method integrates into IPP interaction flows; and
2. Describe implementation considerations for authentication in general, including factors that influence user experience and technical protocol concerns.
> On Jul 1, 2019, at 3:20 PM, Kennedy, Smith (Wireless & Standards Architect) via ipp <ipp at pwg.org> wrote:
>> Greetings,
>> From our LCRC review of IPP Authentication Methods, it was pointed out in the review that the document was lacking a "Design Requirements" subsection to section 3. We decided to post a draft here on the reflector, and once consensus was reached, to add that to the final draft to be used in the PWG Formal Vote of Approval.
>>> 3.5 Design Requirements
>> The design requirements for this IPP Authentication Methods Best Practice document are:
>> 1. Illustrate how each authentication method currently defined for IPP integrates into IPP interaction flows;
> 2. Identify and describe points to be considered in implementing Client or Printer support for authentication in general, including factors that influence user experience as well as protocol technical concerns.
>>> Thoughts?
>> Smith
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