Hi Smith,
At least in IETF and ISO documents the "Changes Since" section is
an appendix with a forward reference from section 1 Intro.
Cheers,
- Ira
Ira McDonald (Musician / Software Architect)
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On Wed, Nov 9, 2016 at 11:45 AM, Kennedy, Smith (Wireless Architect) <
smith.kennedy at hp.com> wrote:
> I think that is a good idea as well. I'll add that and post a new release
> here in a few minutes. But should it be that late in the document? Wouldn't
> it be better if it was inserted in between the current section 3
> "Requirements" and section 4 "Overview of Finishing", or the current
> section 4 "Overview of Finishing" and section 5 "Job Template Attributes"?
>> Smith
>>>> On Nov 9, 2016, at 7:57 AM, Ira McDonald <blueroofmusic at gmail.com> wrote:
>> Hi Mike,
>> I like your suggestion and agree with your initial suggested content.
>> These "Changes Since" sections are important for new readers and
> those who've "been away for awhile."
>> Cheers,
> - Ira
>>> Ira McDonald (Musician / Software Architect)
> Co-Chair - TCG Trusted Mobility Solutions WG
> Chair - Linux Foundation Open Printing WG
> Secretary - IEEE-ISTO Printer Working Group
> Co-Chair - IEEE-ISTO PWG Internet Printing Protocol WG
> IETF Designated Expert - IPP & Printer MIB
> Blue Roof Music / High North Inc
>http://sites.google.com/site/blueroofmusic>http://sites.google.com/site/highnorthinc> mailto: blueroofmusic at gmail.com> Jan-April: 579 Park Place Saline, MI 48176 734-944-0094
> May-Dec: PO Box 221 Grand Marais, MI 49839 906-494-2434
>>> On Wed, Nov 9, 2016 at 8:29 AM, Michael Sweet <msweet at apple.com> wrote:
>>> All,
>>>> It occurs to me, after looking at the current stable draft of IPP
>> Finishings 2.1, that we don't have a high-level "Changes" section detailing
>> the changes between published versions of PWG 5100.1 like we do for
>> RFC2910bis and RFC2911bis, and that such a section would help our
>> discussions at the F2F as well as providing useful context for readers once
>> the update is published.
>>>> Proposed content:
>>>> 11. Overview of Changes
>>>> 11.1 Changes in IPP Finishings v2.1
>>>> The following changes were made for IPP Finishings v2.1:
>>>> - Added finishing enums and templates for multiple-hole punching and an
>> engineering Z fold.
>> - Defined an extension naming convention for the "finishing-template"
>> member attribute.
>> - Added the "media-sheets-supported" member attribute for the
>> "finishings-col-database" and "finishings-col-ready" attributes.
>> - Added the "stitching-method" member attribute for the "finishings-col",
>> "finishings-col-database", and "finishings-col-ready" attributes.
>> - Added the "printer-finisher-supplies" and "printer-finisher-supplies-description"
>> attributes.
>>>> 11.2 Changes in IPP Finishings v2.0
>>>> The following changes were made for IPP Finishings v2.0:
>>>> - Moved definition of PWG 5100.3 "finishings-col" attribute to this
>> document and added new member attributes for all finishings processes.
>> - Added finishing enums and templates for coating, lamination, triple
>> stapling, different kinds of punching, and common folds.
>> - Added the "finishings-col-database" and "job-pages-per-set" attributes.
>> - Added the "media-size" and "media-size-name" member attributes for the
>> "finishings-col-database" and "finishings-col-ready" attributes.
>>>> _________________________________________________________
>> Michael Sweet, Senior Printing System Engineer
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