[IPP] Subject: Xerox has reviewed the IPP Authentication Methods and has one comment

[IPP] Subject: Xerox has reviewed the IPP Authentication Methods and has one comment

Cihan Colakoglu Cihan.Colakoglu at dda.kyocera.com
Thu Feb 28 10:54:52 UTC 2019


Hello,

I see a repetition below (blue color)

The 'certificate' IPP Authentication method uses X.509 certificate authentication via TLS. X.509 certificate authentication via TLS. This authentication method is initiated by the Printer by sending a Certificate Request message during the Transport Layer Security (TLS) [RFC5246] handshake.

I guess the intent was the following?

The 'certificate' IPP Authentication method uses X.509 certificate authentication via TLS.  This authentication method is initiated by the Printer by sending a Certificate Request message during the Transport Layer Security (TLS) [RFC5246] handshake.


Best Regards,
Cihan Colakoglu
Kyocera Document Solutions

From: ipp <ipp-bounces at pwg.org> On Behalf Of Ira McDonald via ipp
Sent: Tuesday, February 26, 2019 8:21 AM
To: Kennedy, Smith (Wireless & Standards Architect) <smith.kennedy at hp.com>; Ira McDonald <blueroofmusic at gmail.com>
Cc: ipp at pwg.org; Alan Sukert <alan.sukert at xerox.com>
Subject: Re: [IPP] Subject: Xerox has reviewed the IPP Authentication Methods and has one comment

Hi Smith and Alan,

I strongly prefer the two sentences solution.

We should all try to avoid long sentences with operational content in more than one
subclause, because they interfere w/ clarity.

Cheers,
- Ira

Ira McDonald (Musician / Software Architect)
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On Tue, Feb 26, 2019 at 10:17 AM Kennedy, Smith (Wireless & Standards Architect) <smith.kennedy at hp.com<mailto:smith.kennedy at hp.com>> wrote:
Thanks Alan! This editorial feedback is important, and I'll make this change before we go to Formal Vote. As an alternative, I could replace the "and" with a period, and make the second half of the (pretty long) sentence a new sentence, like so:

The 'certificate' IPP Authentication method uses X.509 certificate authentication via TLS. X.509 certificate authentication via TLS. This authentication method is initiated by the Printer by sending a Certificate Request message during the Transport Layer Security (TLS) [RFC5246] handshake.

Any strong opinions either way? I'm also not sure that I should be capitalizing "Authentication" in "The 'certificate' IPP Authentication method...".

Smith



On Feb 26, 2019, at 6:01 AM, Sukert, Alan <alan.sukert at xerox.com<mailto:alan.sukert at xerox.com>> wrote:

Minor comment (grammatically sentence did not read correctly; suggested addition is in red type) that can be ignored if needed to approve - Lines 272-274: The 'certificate' IPP Authentication method uses X.509 certificate authentication via TLS. X.509 certificate authentication via TLS and is initiated by the Printer by sending a Certificate Request message during the Transport Layer Security (TLS) [RFC5246] handshake.

Alan Sukert
Product Security Specialist
Xerox Research and Product Development/ Product Security and Development Process Controls
Xerox Certified Green Belt
Alan.Sukert at xerox.com<mailto:Alan.Sukert at xerox.com>| tel 585.427.1413
MS 0111-03A | 800 Phillips Road | Webster, NY 14580 USA

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Subject: [PWG-Announce] PWG Last Call: IPP Authentication Methods (Ends February 28, 2019)

Hi,

[This PWG Last Call starts today, February 1, 2019, and ends Thursday, February 28, 2019 at 10pm US Pacific time.]

This is the formal announcement of the IPP Authentication Methods best practice docuemnt, located at:

   https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippauth-20190116.pdf<https://protect-us.mimecast.com/s/qaTbCzp5G5IogBmDC4WiZo?domain=ftp.pwg.org>

The IPP WG has completed extensive review of the various revisions of this document and a workgroup last call.

The PWG Process/3.0 requires that a quorum of PWG members (30% or 7 members) must acknowledge a PWG Last Call (with or without comments), before any document can progress to PWG Formal Vote.  This PWG Last Call is NOT a Formal Vote but it DOES require your review acknowledgment.  The PWG Definition of the Standards Development Process Version 3.0 is located at:

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