[IPP] Subject: Xerox has reviewed the IPP Authentication Methods and has one comment

[IPP] Subject: Xerox has reviewed the IPP Authentication Methods and has one comment

Kennedy, Smith (Wireless & Standards Architect) smith.kennedy at hp.com
Tue Feb 26 15:17:16 UTC 2019


Thanks Alan! This editorial feedback is important, and I'll make this change before we go to Formal Vote. As an alternative, I could replace the "and" with a period, and make the second half of the (pretty long) sentence a new sentence, like so:

The 'certificate' IPP Authentication method uses X.509 certificate authentication via TLS. X.509 certificate authentication via TLS. This authentication method is initiated by the Printer by sending a Certificate Request message during the Transport Layer Security (TLS) [RFC5246] handshake.

Any strong opinions either way? I'm also not sure that I should be capitalizing "Authentication" in "The 'certificate' IPP Authentication method...".

Smith



> On Feb 26, 2019, at 6:01 AM, Sukert, Alan <alan.sukert at xerox.com> wrote:
> 
> Minor comment (grammatically sentence did not read correctly; suggested addition is in red type) that can be ignored if needed to approve - Lines 272-274: The 'certificate' IPP Authentication method uses X.509 certificate authentication via TLS. X.509 certificate authentication via TLS and is initiated by the Printer by sending a Certificate Request message during the Transport Layer Security (TLS) [RFC5246] handshake.
> 
> Alan Sukert
> Product Security Specialist
> Xerox Research and Product Development/ Product Security and Development Process Controls
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> [This PWG Last Call starts today, February 1, 2019, and ends Thursday, February 28, 2019 at 10pm US Pacific time.]
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