Hi,
The latest draft of the Semantic Model Work Group Charter, incorporating all of the suggested edits received on November 19th, has been
posted. We are hoping to have a stable draft available for tomorrow's PWG Steering Committee meeting so that the charter can be approved.
The draft charter can be found here:
ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/sm3/wd/wd-sm30-charter-20131120.docxftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/sm3/wd/wd-sm30-charter-20131120.pdf
Red line versions
ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/sm3/wd/wd-sm30-charter-20131120-rev.docxftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/sm3/wd/wd-sm30-charter-20131120-rev.pdf
Please review the draft and post any comments with suggestions for
changes to the sm3 e-mail list before 2:00 PM EST this coming Thursday (Sept
21st).
Thanks.
Best Regards,
/Paul
Paul Tykodi
Principal Consultant
TCS - Tykodi Consulting Services LLC
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Paul,
Thanks for updating this so quickly.
Some small comments:
1. The problem statement now seems really abrupt. How about:
"The Semantic Model workgroup has previously modeled and defined interfaces
for the services hosted on Multifunction Devices. With the advent of both
mobile and cloud based imaging applications, the scope of the Semantic
Model workgroup activities is being expanded to include the modeling and
interfaces of distributed imaging systems."
2. I still feel OOS-1 excludes incorporation of cloud-based solutions (which
are indirectly network connected
) A simple fix would be to remove “directly”,
e.g.:
“OOS-1. Definition of any service management or job operations for Imaging
Systems that are not network connected.”
3. JobTicket-2 should probably have the same Q1 2015 milestone as SM3-2 since
the two specs are co-dependent.
On Nov 20, 2013, at 10:53 AM, Paul Tykodi <ptykodi at yahoo.com> wrote:
> Hi,
>> The latest draft of the Semantic Model Work Group Charter, incorporating all of the suggested edits received on November 19th, has been posted. We are hoping to have a stable draft available for tomorrow's PWG Steering Committee meeting so that the charter can be approved.
>> The draft charter can be found here:
>>ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/sm3/wd/wd-sm30-charter-20131120.docx>ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/sm3/wd/wd-sm30-charter-20131120.pdf>> Red line versions
>>ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/sm3/wd/wd-sm30-charter-20131120-rev.docx>ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/sm3/wd/wd-sm30-charter-20131120-rev.pdf>> Please review the draft and post any comments with suggestions for changes to the sm3 e-mail list before 2:00 PM EST this coming Thursday (Sept 21st).
>> Thanks.
>> Best Regards,
>> /Paul
>> Paul Tykodi
> Principal Consultant
> TCS - Tykodi Consulting Services LLC
>>> Tel/Fax: 603-343-1820
> Mobile: 603-866-0712
> E-mail: ptykodi at yahoo.com> WWW: http://www.tykodi.com> _______________________________________________
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Michael Sweet, Senior Printing System Engineer, PWG Chair