Thank you Benjamin for your contribution to achieving quorum and for the feedback on the draft!
Happy holidays,
Smith
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HP Inc.
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> On Dec 19, 2022, at 5:13 PM, Benjamin Gordon <bmgordon at chromium.org> wrote:
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> Sorry about the slow review. Just a few minor editorial comments:
>> Section 1:
> line 381: depends -> depend for grammatical agreement with "client modules"
>> Section 5.1:
> line 899: It seems like a phrase is missing to explain when the printer must reject the operation. Should it include something like "When the operation is not allowed for a security reason" similar to PWG 5100.13-2012?
>> Section 6.1.4:
> line 1075: implemneting -> implementing
>> Section 6.2.2.2 <http://6.2.2.2>:
> line 1131: Some words seem to be missing before "expand the Impression".
> lines 1134/1138: The two figures have the same caption. Should they mention "extend" and "scale" to help the reader see which method each illustrates?
>> Section 12.1.1:
> line 2517: extra "he" in "the he" at the end of the line
>> Thanks,
> Benjamin
>
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