[IPP] Subject: TIC has reviewed the IPP System Service v1.0 and has comments

[William Wagner]

Some minor things. Line numbers refer to PDF.

line 791 “System Serviceand”  should be “System Service and”.

Line 1754 “Note: Appropriate Subunits are automatically associated with a new Printer object based on “printer-service-type”, inherent System capabilities, (out-of-band)System policies.”  Add “and/or” before (out-of-band)? Also, don’t understand following sentence. Also, seems to be missing “)” . Unintended font change? 

Line 3471  “unique identier of the Resource” should be  identifier?

Line 3684  section Error! 3684Reference source not found.

Thanks, Bill W.
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