Thanks Alan!
Ira McDonald (Musician / Software Architect)
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On Mon, Jun 17, 2019 at 3:17 PM Sukert, Alan <Alan.Sukert at xerox.com> wrote:
> Comments against this version:
>> 1. Page 22, Section 4.4.2, Line 708 -- 'The following attributes are
> part of a Close-Job response' should read ' The following attributes are
> part of a Resubmit-Job response'.
> 2. Page 38, Section 5.5.1, Lines 1144 & 1155 -- This section reads
> “This DEPRECATED attribute lists the supported member attributes of the
> "document-format-details" operation (section 5.1.1) and Document/Job
> Status (section 5.2.1) attributes”. document-format-details is in Section
> 5.2.1 and Document/Job Status would be Section 5.2.
> 3. Page 39, Section 5.5.11, Line 1177 -- "job-cancel-after" is in
> Section 5.4.3, not 5.4.1.
> 4. Page 40 – Several sections on this page referenced ‘Section
> (N.M.P)’. It is not clear what this is a section reference to.
> 5. Page 45, Section 5.5.39, Line 1361 – Reference to Section 5.3.1.6
> should be to Section 5.3.1.7 and “media-hold-count" I believe should be
> media-hole-count".
> 6. Page 45, Section 5.5.43, Line 1376 – Reference to Section 5.3.1.5
> should be to Section 5.3.1.12.
> 7. Page 45, Section 5.5.46, Line 1387 – Reference to Section 5.3.1.12
> should be to Section 5.3.1.15.
> 8. Page 46, Section 5.5.51, Line 1406 – Reference to Section 5.3.1.21
> should be to Section 5.3.1.22.
> 9. Page 46, Section 5.5.53, Line 1414 – Reference to Section 5.3.1
> should be to Section 5.3.2.
> 10. Page 48, Section 6.4, Line 1460 – Reference to Section 5.1.1
> should be to Section 5.1.2.
>>> Alan Sukert
> Product Security Specialist
> Xerox Research and Development/ Product Security and Development Process
> Controls
> Xerox Certified Green Belt
>Alan.Sukert at xerox.com| tel 585.427.1413
> MS 0111-03A | 800 Phillips Road | Webster, NY 14580 USA
>> -----Original Message-----
> From: pwg-announce <pwg-announce-bounces at pwg.org> On Behalf Of Michael
> Sweet via pwg-announce
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> Subject: [PWG-Announce] PWG Last Call: IPP Job Extensions v2.0 (JOBEXT)
> (Ends June 21, 2019)
>> [This PWG Last Call starts today, May 24, 2019 and ends Friday, June 21,
> 2019 at 10pm US Pacific time.]
>> Hi,
>> This is the formal announcement of the IPP Job Extensions v2.0 (JOBEXT)
> specification, located at:
>>https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippjobext20-20190524.pdf>> The IPP WG has completed extensive review of the various revisions of this
> document and a workgroup last call.
>> The PWG Process/3.0 requires that a quorum of PWG members (30% or 8
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