Hi Chris,
[I dropped pwg-announce on this reply.]
The link for the document we are reviewing is:
https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippauth-20190328.pdf <https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippauth-20190328.pdf>
I just downloaded that and there are no redlines. Is this the URL you are reviewing? I'm not seeing any of the issues you are seeing in this document edition.
Smith
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Wireless & Standards Architect - IPG-PPS
Standards - IEEE ISTO PWG / Bluetooth SIG / Wi-Fi Alliance / NFC Forum / USB-IF
Chair, IEEE ISTO Printer Working Group
HP Inc.
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> On Apr 25, 2019, at 1:00 PM, Rizzo, Christopher <Christopher.Rizzo at xerox.com> wrote:
>> Reviewed the marked up version, not sure how/where to get the unmarked version. Most of these comments are trivial grammar/syntax and
>> Lines 229-230 on page 17 define a section 4 that has no content. Was this supposed to be bullet 2 in section 3.7?
>> Line 231 has an apparently unnecessary page break, causing most of page 17 to be blank, or is this just a markup view issue? Same for page 20 and 21.
>> Line 249: "system system"
>> Note other issues that I can see.
>> Xerox Approves (do I need to sent that in separate note?
>> Christopher Rizzo
> Xerox Corporation
> GDG/Discovery/Advance Technology
> 26600 SW Parkway Ave.
> Wilsonville, OR 97070-9251
> Phone: (585) 314-6936
> Email: Christopher.Rizzo at xerox.com <mailto:Christopher.Rizzo at xerox.com>
>> "The realization came over me with full force that a good part of the remainder of my life was going to be spent in finding errors in my own programs."
> -Maurice Wilkes, Memoirs of a Computer Pioneer
>> From: ipp <ipp-bounces at pwg.org> on behalf of PWG Workgroup <ipp at pwg.org>
> Reply-To: "Kennedy, Smith (Wireless & Standards Architect)" <smith.kennedy at hp.com>
> Date: Tuesday, April 23, 2019 at 2:14 PM
> To: "pwg-announce at pwg.org" <pwg-announce at pwg.org>, PWG Workgroup <ipp at pwg.org>
> Subject: Re: [IPP] PWG Last Call: IPP Authentication Methods (Ends 11 May 2019)
>> Greetings all,
>> Please DO contribute your response to this Last Call at the point when you have completed your review, since it assists us in achieving quorum, which is important for advancing it to completion and publication!
>> The PWG thanks you for your time and contribution!
>> Smith
>> /**
> Smith Kennedy
> Chair, IEEE ISTO Printer Working Group
> HP Inc.
> */
>>>>> On Apr 19, 2019, at 11:04 AM, Ira McDonald <blueroofmusic at gmail.com <mailto:blueroofmusic at gmail.com>> wrote:
>>>>>> [corrected typo in Subject line - ends 11 May as per body of original message]
>>>> Hi,
>>>> [This PWG Last Call starts today, 11 April 2019, and ends Thursday, 11 May 2019 at 10pm US Pacific time.]
>>>> This is the formal announcement of the IPP Authentication Methods best practice document, located at:
>>>>https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippauth-20190328.pdf <https://protect-us.mimecast.com/s/ZVqbC2kr5rfMZzyzSnvHV9?domain=ftp.pwg.org>
>>>> The IPP WG has completed extensive review of the various revisions of this document and two IPP WG last calls. The PWG has completed one last
>> call and all of the comments have been resolved in this new version.
>>>> The PWG Process/3.0 requires that a quorum of PWG members (30% or 8 members*) must acknowledge a PWG Last Call (with or without comments), before any document can progress to PWG Formal Vote. This PWG Last Call is NOT a Formal Vote but it DOES require your review acknowledgment. The PWG Definition of the Standards Development Process Version 3.0 is located at:
>>>>https://www.pwg.org/chair/membership_docs/pwg-process30.pdf <https://protect-us.mimecast.com/s/ThT7C31v5vin9zNztqad3u?domain=pwg.org>
>>>> * Many thanks to Google for becoming a PWG member!
>>>> HOW TO RESPOND
>>>> Send an email with *exactly* the following subject line format:
>>>> Subject: <Company Name> has reviewed the IPP Authentication Methods and has [no] comments
>>>>>> WHERE TO SEND YOUR RESPONSE
>>>> Please do NOT simply reply to this note on the PWG-Announce list.
>>>> Please send your response to *all* of the following email addresses:
>>>> ipp at pwg.org <https://protect-us.mimecast.com/s/8wKgC4xw7wuX9KkKiBV_kF?domain=pwg.org> (IPP WG mailing list - you must be subscribed!);
>> smith.kennedy at hp.com <https://protect-us.mimecast.com/s/hvOoC5yx5xsBpLNLC2Nbti?domain=hp.com> (Smith Kennedy, PWG Chair, IPP Authentication Methods editor)
>> blueroofmusic at gmail.com <https://protect-us.mimecast.com/s/N2vjC68y5yI50YwYCxwTcx?domain=gmail.com> (Ira McDonald, PWG Secretary, IPP WG Co-Chair)
>> ptykod at tykodi.com <https://protect-us.mimecast.com/s/eUeeC73z5zuDV171HRQemg?domain=tykodi.com> (Paul Tykodi, IPP WG Co-Chair)
>> msweet at apple.com <https://protect-us.mimecast.com/s/OaxvC82A5AhoPp4pizWy5i?domain=apple.com> (Mike Sweet, IPP WG Secretary)
>>>> Note: You must be subscribed to the IPP WG mailing list to send email to that list - otherwise your email will be silently discarded. You can subscribe to this list at:
>>>>https://www.pwg.org/mailman/listinfo/ipp <https://protect-us.mimecast.com/s/QDT2C9rB5BFGNE7ESZ0Ak8?domain=pwg.org>
>>>> Cheers,
>> - Ira (PWG Secretary, IPP WG Co-chair)
>>>> Ira McDonald (Musician / Software Architect)
>> Co-Chair - TCG Trusted Mobility Solutions WG
>> Co-Chair - TCG Metadata Access Protocol SG
>> Chair - Linux Foundation Open Printing WG
>> Secretary - IEEE-ISTO Printer Working Group
>> Co-Chair - IEEE-ISTO PWG Internet Printing Protocol WG
>> IETF Designated Expert - IPP & Printer MIB
>> Blue Roof Music / High North Inc
>>http://sites.google.com/site/blueroofmusic <https://protect-us.mimecast.com/s/1TbEC0Rp6ps1gwPwUo9S74?domain=sites.google.com>
>>http://sites.google.com/site/highnorthinc <https://protect-us.mimecast.com/s/l89kCgJKgKTMwZQZS68T5T?domain=sites.google.com>
>> mailto: blueroofmusic at gmail.com <mailto:blueroofmusic at gmail.com>
>> PO Box 221 Grand Marais, MI 49839 906-494-2434
>>
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