Smith,
Couple quick editorial notes on the latest draft:
- Section 3: Suggest title be changed to "Overview of IPP Authentication Methods"; it isn't really rationale, and this isn't a standards track document, so I think we can relax the usual boilerplate stuff.
- Section 3.1: Also mention printer-xri-supported's xri-authentication member attribute (RFC3380)
- Section 3.1.3: Line 111 should say "HTTP Basic" (capitalized, no quotes around Basic)
- Section 3.1.4: Line 121 should say "HTTP Digest" (capitalized, no quotes around Digest)
- Section 3.1.5: Ditto for Negotiate
- Section 3.1.6: "HTTP Bearer Token Usage", RFC 6750 (5749 is OAuth 1.0)
- Section 3.1.x: Add section on 'certificate' - requires TLS, which can be done inline with HTTP Upgrade
> On Dec 5, 2017, at 4:10 PM, Kennedy, Smith (Wireless & Standards Architec) <smith.kennedy at hp.com> wrote:
>> Greetings,
>> I have uploaded a new draft of the IPP Authentication Methods whitepaper for review. It is available here:
>>https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/whitepaper/tb-ippauth-20171205.odt>https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/whitepaper/tb-ippauth-20171205.pdf>https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/whitepaper/tb-ippauth-20171205-rev.pdf>https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/whitepaper/tb-ippauth-20171205-rev.odt>> Notable changes in this draft include:
>> * Corrected OAuth2 sequence diagram to more correctly describe the sequence of operations and actors involved in an OAuth2 authenticated IPP Printer scenario.
>> * Added Implementation Recommendations that were revealed during the course of correcting the OAuth2 sequence diagram.
>> Cheers,
>> Smith
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