[IPP] Assistance in correcting the "OAuth2" diagram in IPP Authentication?

[Kennedy, Smith (Wireless Architect)]

Hi Mike,

One of my action items to move the IPP Authentication white paper forward was to solicit help from you in correcting the OAuth2 diagram(s). Could you take a look at the attached PlantUML sequence diagram files and make corrections you feel are needed? The versions from the latest white paper (from August) are attached - there are two of them. You can edit it in any text editor, then render it using the PlantUML tool:

http://plantuml.com/download

Thanks in advance! 

Smith

/**
    Smith Kennedy
    Wireless Architect - Client Software - IPG-PPS
    Standards - IEEE ISTO PWG / Bluetooth SIG / Wi-Fi Alliance / NFC Forum / USB IF
    Chair, IEEE ISTO Printer Working Group
    HP Inc.
*/


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