Comments:
1. The intro paragraph for Section 3 is a bit repetitious. I recommend combining the last two sentences to read "This section also describes ... and defines ...".
2. Missing bullet on line 236
3. Bad justification on line 338
4. Suggest the removal of "and because REQUIRED Create-Job/Print-Job in IPP/2.1 make Validate-Job trivial to implement" from lines 382-383 since we are not in the position to make that assessment.
5. Suggest the removal of "and because REQUIRED Create-Job/Print-Job in IPP/2.1 make Validate-Job trivial to implement" from lines 408-409 since we are not in the position to make that assessment.
6. Suggest change of wording on line 448: "because it OFTEN cannot be supported"
7. Suggest change of wording on line 470: "because it OFTEN cannot be supported"
8. Suggest change of wording on line 498: "because it OFTEN cannot be supported"
9. Missing 2.2 version after line 581 for IANA registration.
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Michael Sweet, Senior Printing System Engineer, PWG Chair
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