Hi all,
Here are some corrections for the IPP Fax:
1) In section 3.4, the paragraph that starts "If the Receiver supports" then
has "a at" which should just be "at".
2) In section 3.4, at the end of the last paragraph, it says "as well as Jobs"
which I think should say "as well as IPP Jobs".
3) In section 3.5, the first paragraph begins "IPPFAX Receiver", and I think
that should say "For an IPPFAX Receiver".
4) In section 4.3, paragraph 1, isn't "of the same name" redundant?
5) In Table 1, there is a superscript of 1 and 2 next to MUST, but no
corresponding footnotes.
6) In section 5.5, line 7, it says 'Printer's "notify-time-interval"'.
Shouldn't that say 'subscription's "notify-time-interval"'?
7) In section 6, paragraph 2, line 3, it says "subscrtions define restrictions
placed the IPP/1.1 Cancel-Job". It should say "placed on the".
8) In Table 7, the header row doesn't need "for Get-Printer-Attributes request"
or "for Get-Printer-Attrubutes response", since that's already stated by the
title of the table.
9) There are several places that say "a IPP" that should say "an IPP".
Regards,
Marty Joel
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