RE: IDS> Updated PWG HCD Health Assessment Attributed document

From: Petrie, Glen (glen.petrie@eitc.epson.com)
Date: Wed Sep 17 2008 - 14:39:46 EDT

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    All,

     

    Comments and/or Suggestion for the Document.

     

    1. Add definitions for the following

            a. Resident Application
            b. Downloadable Application

    2. For the Attributes HCD_Firmware_Version,
    HCD_Downloadlable_Version, HCD_Resident_Application_Version; change the
    second half of the sentence from "... and can uniquely describe..." to
    "... and MUST uniquely describe"
    3. Under HCD_Downloadable_Application_Name and
    HCD_Resident_Application_Name; move all of the content after the first
    sentence of each attribute to the definition section.
    4. I do not understand the definition for the HCD_Name attribute.
    Is this meant to be the 'user-friendly name"???
    5. There is a definition for "Applet" which seems to be distinct
    from "Application" but there is no associated attributes for
    downloadable/resident name/version/patches/enabled applets. Should
    these attributes be added or should the definition of application be
    extended to include applets? If the later is considered, then a simple
    bit-field (boolean) attribute could be added to denoted the application
    is an applet type.
    6. I suggest that Conformance statements be reworded such they use
    one of the Conformance Terminology key words (MUST, SHALL, etc.). In
    most cases, it just means changing the current key words to
    capitalization within the sentence.
    7.

     

    ________________________________

    From: owner-ids@pwg.org [mailto:owner-ids@pwg.org] On Behalf Of Jerry
    Thrasher
    Sent: Wednesday, September 03, 2008 7:36 AM
    To: ids@pwg.org
    Subject: IDS> Updated PWG HCD Health Assessment Attributed document

     

    I have integrated the action items resulting from the last F2F meeting
    discussion and review of the
    document.

    The updated documents are located at:

    ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ids/wd/wd-idsattributes10-20080903.pdf

    ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ids/wd/wd-idsattributes10-20080903_ncb.pdf

    ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ids/wd/wd-idsattributes10-20080903.doc

    Jerry Thrasher
    Senior Engineer, WW Corporate Standards
    Lexmark International Inc.
    Ph:859-825-4056, Fax:859-232-7628
    Email:thrasher(at)lexmark(dot)com

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