Comments:
Line 69: Remove and then fix-up pagination of boilerplate section
Line 114: There really should be more text here, probably from the web site, (this is the "About" text)
Line 249 (section 3.1): "In recent years network printers have evolved .." - maybe reword as "in the years since the Printer MIB v2 was published"?
IANA registry stuff looks accurate and has the correct format (imports fine with my little tool I use to make changes to the XML...)
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Michael Sweet, Senior Printing System Engineer, PWG Chair
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