I have posted suggested revisions to the article and the questions at
ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/wims/white/mpsa-pwg-power-article-dec-2010-ww.pdf
and
ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/wims/white/mpsa-pwg-power-article-dec-2010-ww.doc.
I apologize, but these changes are to the original draft, not the latest.
Although a red-line MS Word view may appear to suggest drastic changes, the
changes are more to order than to content. However, I do suggest that we
drop the history, since I think MPSA interest will be more on what is going
to happen (that affects them) than what happened. Also, considering that
some portion of the audience is in the business of providing a service
including the devices, I suggested some rewording of the questions.
Thanks,
Bill Wagner
From: wims-bounces at pwg.org [mailto:wims-bounces at pwg.org] On Behalf Of Ira
McDonald
Sent: Sunday, November 28, 2010 2:41 PM
To: wims at pwg.org; Ira McDonald
Subject: [WIMS] Draft of MPSA Power article/survey (28 Nov 2010)
Hi,
I just posted a slightly revised third draft of the December MPSA PWG
Power Management article (w/ survey questions at the end) at:
ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/wims/white/mpsa-pwg-power-article-dec-2010-v3.doc
I changed the "Tech support..." use case per Andrew's comments (which my MS
Word 2007 didn't complain about in grammar-check) and cleaned up wording
in several other paragraphs.
I would like to give this to Jim Fitzpatrick by THIS Tuesday at the latest,
for
publication in the Monday 5 December MPSA newsletter.
Any last comments?
Cheers,
- Ira
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