Hi Jerry,
Retitled for PWG Last Call quorum visibility.
Pasted your comments inline below to show in the WG mail archive.
Many thanks for your comments.
Cheers,
- Ira
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Power Model 26 Sept. 2010.
1. line 285...the sentence is incomplete/fragmented
2. line 342...the sentence is incomplete/fragmented
3. line 723...extra comma
4. line 781...this sentence implies (forever) that something will be
registered with IANA
suggest actually registering these values with IANA and updating the
sentence
5. line 903...the sentence states that transitional power states can be
requested....is this
true? wouldn't think you should be able to do that...only stable power
states.
6. line 1419....hone should be none
7. line 1483, 1484...need space between time and "am"
Power MIB 26 Sept. 2010.
1. line 366...need to make sure this link is updated to a stable location
(currently not a note
for this)
On Thu, Oct 28, 2010 at 11:34 AM, Jerry Thrasher <thrasher at lexmark.com>wrote:
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