In considering the Xerox comments to the MFD Model and Common Semantics , it
appears that the PDF version does not agree with the MS Word file. (The Word
file shows 204 pages while the pdf shows 217.) This likely is partially a
result of the duplication of figures (as indicated in the comments) which
does not appear in the MS Word version. I apologize for this, but I had
mistakenly expected the PDF to agree with the MS Word versions, at least in
terms of content if not format. The last call period for this document is
intended to end on 25 February. I will post a version addressing the
comments received to date (with a list of changes) in the next day or two,
provided that I can figure out how to avoid the MS Word to PDF translation
problem. If reviewing the currently posted document, consider the figures to
appear the first time. The duplicates occurring on later pages are ghosts.
Thanks,
Bill Wagner
From: mfd-bounces at pwg.org [mailto:mfd-bounces at pwg.org] On Behalf Of Zehler,
Peter
Sent: Monday, February 21, 2011 1:05 PM
To: mfd at pwg.org
Subject: [MFD] Xerox has reviewed the MFD Model and Common Semantics and has
comments
Here are the comments from Xerox:
SECTION 2.2.1 page 22 figure 6 Primary
interfaces is missing a line from scanner subunit to Email Out
Section 2.2.2 page 24
duplicate graphic of figure 7 on page 26.
Section 2.4.2 page 30 line 825 job
produces 1 ton should be job produces 1 to N
Section 3.2 page 48 line 1149 missing
reference source
Section 3.6 page 60 line 1212 missing
reference source
Section 3.10 page 70 line 1280 missing
reference source
line 1282
figure 45 should be figure 44
Section 4.3 page 95
duplicate graphic of figure 62
Section 4.3.1 page 102
10th attribute from the top, is annotation a instance of imposition, if not
it should be added to the graphic
Section 4.3.3 page 112
duplicate graphic of figure 73
Line 1644
References figure 73 but no graphic below the reference.
page 113
duplicate graphic of figure 74
page 114
duplicate graphic of figure 75
Section 4.7.1 page 129 line 1759 reference
source not found
Section 5.1 page 132 line 1829 reference
source not found
page 133
graphic missing caption Image Job Status Element
Page 135 Figure 84
caption not bolded
Section 5.2.1 page 141
does imposition fulfill requirement for annotation programming
Section 5.2.3 page 150
duplicate graphic of figure 94
Section 7.1 page 165 Figure 102 graphic
shows up on this page but is referenced in the document as being on page 167
Section 7.1.4 page 167 line 2126 Scheduling
of Jobs should be scheduling of the service's Jobs.
Section 7.2.1. page 168
duplicate graphic of figure 103
page 171
duplicate graphic of figure 103
Section 7.3.1.3 page 183 line 2423 reference
source not found
line 2424
acel<service>job should be Cancel<service>Job
Peter Zehler
Xerox Research Center Webster
Email: Peter.Zehler at Xerox.com
Voice: (585) 265-8755
FAX: (585) 265-7441
US Mail: Peter Zehler
Xerox Corp.
800 Phillips Rd.
M/S 128-25E
Webster NY, 14580-9701
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