Hi,
I modified the Goals section using Stuart's suggested text. And I expanded
the out of scope slightly.
Please take a look.
Remember - We vote this Wed in Tucson.
Sandra
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Sandra Matts
Engineer / Scientist
Hewlett-Packard
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