Peter,
I started reviewing the SM2 document posted below but I believe some may
be needed.
1. Bulleted sections, like on page 12, are in a smaller font than
the rest of the document. I recommend all font size be the same
2. In figure 2.0 if PrintJobDescription:JobName is required, then
the connector for PrintJobDescription in the diagram should be solid.
3. Why does Figure 5 not have a yellow background.
4. Figure 8, 15, 16 and most figures afterwards have an image/font
size that is very marginal and can be difficult to read when printed.
5. On Page 32, the small table is split across pages.
6. I would suggest starting Table 4 on a new page and a new page
mark at the end of the table (the same for Table 5).
glen
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Sent: Saturday, June 30, 2012 5:38 AM
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Subject: [Pwg-Announce] PWG Formal Vote: PWG Print Job Ticket and
AssociatedCapabilities (PJT)
Greetings:
VOTES ARE CONFIDENTIAL! See voting instructions below.
This email initiates the Formal Approval vote by the PWG membership on
the
PWG Print Job Ticket and Associated Capabilities specification (PJT),
which is located at:
ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/mfd/wd/wd-sm20-printjobticket10-20120630.pdf
The complete list of PWG Last Call issues and resolutions is located at:
ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/mfd/wd/PrintJobTicketLastCallComment-resolutio
n-20120630.pdf
VOTING PERIOD: This Formal Vote will start today on Saturday 30 June
2012
and will end at 10pm (US Pacific Time) on Monday 30 July 2012.
Valid votes are: Yes, No, No (with Strong Objection), Abstain.
Representatives from PWG member companies are strongly encouraged to
exercise their right to vote.
PWG Privacy Policy: Your vote is confidential and will not be disclosed
by PWG officers or document editors.
HOW TO VOTE:
Send an email with *exactly* the following subject line format:
PWG PJT Formal Vote-<company name>-<voter's last
name>-<Yes/No/Abstain>
Example:
PWG PJT Formal Vote-Acme-McGee-Yes
Rules:
(1) Any "No" vote MUST state the reason for the "No" vote and MUST
contain
a description of the *technical* changes required to turn the "No" vote
into a
"Yes" vote - otherwise the "No" vote will NOT be counted, per PWG
Process/3.0.
(2) Any "No" vote MUST NOT contain *editorial* comments, per PWG
Process/3.0.
(3) Any "Yes" vote MAY contain "editorial" comments, per PWG
Process/3.0.
(4) Any "Yes" vote MUST NOT contain any *technical* comments, per PWG
Process/3.0.
(5) Any "Abstain" vote counts toward quorum, but not approval.
WHERE TO SEND YOUR VOTE:
Please send your vote to *all* of the following email addresses
(replacing
"dot" with '.' and "at" with '@'):
msweet "at" apple "dot" com (Mike Sweet, PWG Chair)
blueroofmusic "at" gmail "dot" com (Ira McDonald, PWG Secretary)
peter "dot" zehler "at" xerox "dot" com (Peter Zehler, SM WG Co-Chair,
PJT Editor)
Please do NOT simply reply to this note on PWG-Announce or the
IPP WG list (to preserve the confidentiality of your vote).
Notes:
(1) This Formal Vote is being conducted under the rules of the PWG
Process/3.0
and the current PWG Policy on Intellectual Property and Confidentiality
agreement.
The 2012 PWG Membership Agreement calls out both of these documents and
the links are provided below.
(2) To be eligible to vote the member MUST have submitted a signed copy
of
the 2012 PWG Membership Agreement and paid their dues.
The PWG Definition of the Standards Development Process Version 3.0 is
located at:
http://www.pwg.org/chair/membership_docs/pwg-process30.pdf
The PWG Policy on Intellectual Property and Confidentiality is located
at:
http://www.pwg.org/chair/membership_docs/pwg-ip-policy.pdf
Peter Zehler
Xerox Research Center Webster
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