[MFD] Tykodi Consulting Services LLC has reviewed the FaxOut Service Semantic Model and Service Interface specification and has comments

[Paul Tykodi]

Hi,

 

I have two comments to add that I do not believe have been previously
mentioned:

 

Line 290 - the use of the word settable is a little bit awkward

-          Suggest replacing settable with the words "can be set" instead

 

Line 463 - the word "the" is missing

-          Change "must be processed according to what user has requested"
to "must be processed according to what the user has requested".

 

Best Regards,

 

/Paul

 

 





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