Line 40, Title contains the word "Network" here but nowhere else.
Line 180, FaxOutServices (grammar error)
Line 197, A FaxOut Instruction Sheet is mentioned here, but don't see where
it's defined or described anywhere.
Line 218, What's the That at the first of the sentence in this line.
(PWG5108.01)?
Line 235, Discusses a clear need to define a web services binding into a Web
Service Schema.....but that's not what is in the docoment.
Line 268, Broken reference
Line 321, MUST NOT begins a sentence (what must not be copied)
Line 362, spacing between section 8.3 reference and the word "for"
Line 370, need period at the end of the sentence.
Line 380, Reference to the figure should be by figure number not position.
(fix multiple occurrences)
Line 427,428 remove extra lines (remove blank lines throughout documents
between text blocks and/or figures)
Line 519, Need line spacing between unordered list and next paragraph
Line 599, Table 2 and Table 3 have multiple occurrences of
non-itallic/non-bold parameters (required are bold and optional are itallic)
ElementsNaturalLanguage (multiple times)
Line 610, reference to model and semantics document is incorrectly named
Line 643, not sure how you mandate "durably" logged without any discussion
or recommendation on what that means. suggest just saying must be logged.
Line 635,636,626,624, 555,556,225,228,331,347,314,.....all extra, unneeded
lines.
*Jerry Thrasher**
*Senior Engineer, WW Corporate Standards
Lexmark International Inc.
C14/082-1, 740 New Circle Rd, Lexington Ky 40550
Office: +1 859 825 4056 Fax: +1 859 232 7628
thrasher(at)lexmark(dot)com
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