Thanks very much for all the hard work in providing necessary details and
ensuring accuracy.
Comments (very minor editorial problems) below:
1) Line 49 - document link needs update.
2) Page 106, Table 44 - "Cross FeedDir" should be concatenated
3) Page 112, Table 48 - typo: "vraious"
4) Page 123, Figure 80 - need updated Schema diagram for
ImagingServiceDescription (as discovered by Pete Z.)
5) Page 124, Table 52 - fix data type for NaturalLanguageSupported (as
discovered by Pete Z.)
6) Page 141, Line 1986 - 'ever' is at the beginning of a sentence. It
should be "However"?
& Line 1902 - need to reformat (apply left justification?) to
remove extra spaces between words.
& Line 1911 - change 'hav' to 'have'.
7) Page 144, Table 62 - "Document Format" should be concatenated
8) Page 155, Lines 1961 & 1962 - reformat (apply left justification?) to
remove extra spaces between words.
9) Page 160, Lines 2002 to 2004 - reformat (apply left justification?) to
remove extra spaces between words.
10) Page 187, Lines 2424 - 2425 & 2438 - reformat (apply left
justification?) to remove extra spaces between words.
11) Page 200, Line 2906 & 2918 - reformat (apply left justification?) to
remove extra spaces between words.
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remove extra spaces between words.
13) Page 202, Line 2968 - reformat (apply left justification?) to remove
extra spaces between words.
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extra spaces between words.
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extra spaces between words.
16) Page 205, Lines 3046, 3070, 3071, 3079 - reformat (apply left
justification?) to remove extra spaces between words.
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justification?) to remove extra spaces between words.
18) Page 209, Line 3203, 3205, 3218 - reformat (apply left justification?)
to remove extra spaces between words.
19) Page 209, Line 3207 - "Media Used Counters" should be followed by a
':', not a period.
20) Page 210, Line 3232, subsection 8.1 heading - left justify the words
in the heading.
21) Page 216, Lines 3332, 3334 - reformat (apply left justification?) to
remove extra spaces between words.
-Nancy
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Nancy Chen
Principal Engineer
Solutions and Technology
Solution Marketing - US
Oki Data
2000 Bishops Gate Blvd.
Mt. Laurel, NJ 08054
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Email: Nancy.Chen at okidata.com
"Zehler, Peter" <Peter.Zehler at xerox.com>
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Subject
[Pwg-Announce] RE: MFD Model and Common Semantics Formal Vote (15 Mar to
15 Apr 2011) (Final Correction)
Correcting two cut and paste errors
1) End date of the vote is April 15 2011.
2) Subject line format for vote is: MFD Model Formal Vote-<company
name>-<voter's last name>-<Yes/No/Abstain>
Included note below is now correct.
Peter Zehler
Xerox Research Center Webster
Email: Peter.Zehler at Xerox.com
Voice: (585) 265-8755
FAX: (585) 265-7441
US Mail: Peter Zehler
Xerox Corp.
800 Phillips Rd.
M/S 128-25E
Webster NY, 14580-9701
From: Zehler, Peter
Sent: Tuesday, March 15, 2011 9:45 AM
To: pwg-announce at pwg.org
Subject: MFD Model and Common Semantics Formal Vote (15 Mar to 15 Apr
2011)
Greetings:
VOTES ARE CONFIDENTIAL! See voting instructions below.
This email initiates the Formal Approval vote by the PWG membership on
the MFD Model and Common Semantics specification, which is located at:
ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/mfd/wd/wd-mfdmodel10-20110310.pdf
The complete list of PWG Last Call issues and resolutions is located at:
ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/mfd/wd/MfdOverallLastCallComment-resolution-20
110310.pdf
VOTING PERIOD: This Formal Vote will start today on Tuesday March,15
2011 and will end at 10pm (US Pacific Time) on Friday 15 April 2011.
Valid votes are: Yes, No, No (with Strong Objection), Abstain.
This specification is the basis upon which other MFD specifications are
based and it is critical that it be approved. PWG member companies are
strongly encouraged to exercise their right to vote.
PWG Privacy Policy: Your vote is confidential and will not be disclosed
by PWG officers or document editors.
HOW TO VOTE:
Send an email with *exactly* the following subject line format:
MFD Model Formal Vote-<company name>-<voter's last
name>-<Yes/No/Abstain>
Example:
MFD Model Formal Vote-Acme-McGee-Yes
Rules:
(1) Any "No" vote MUST state the reason for the "No" vote and MUST
contain
a description of the *technical* changes required to turn the "No" vote
into
a
"Yes" vote - otherwise the "No" vote will NOT be counted, per PWG
Process/3.0.
(2) Any "No" vote MUST NOT contain *editorial* comments, per PWG
Process/3.0.
(3) Any "Yes" vote MAY contain "editorial" comments, per PWG
Process/3.0.
(4) Any "Yes" vote MUST NOT contain any *technical* comments, per PWG
Process/3.0.
(5) Any "Abstain" vote counts toward quorum, but not approval.
WHERE TO SEND YOUR VOTE:
Please send your vote to *all* of the following email addresses
(replacing
"dot" with '.' and "at" with '@'):
msweet"at"apple"dot"com (Mike Sweet, PWG Chair, IPP/2.0 SE Co-Editor)
ptykodi"at"tykodi"dot"com (Paul Tykodi, PWG Secretary)
Peter"dot"Zehler"at"Xerox"dot"com (Peter Zehler, MFD WG -Chair)
Please do NOT simply reply to this note on PWG-Announce or the
MFD WG list (to preserve the confidentiality of your vote).
Notes:
(1) This Formal Vote is being conducted under the rules of the PWG
Process/3.0 and the current PWG Policy on Intellectual Property and
Confidentiality
agreement. The 2011 PWG Membership Agreement calls out both of these
documents and the links are provided below.
(2) To be eligible to vote the member MUST have submitted a signed copy
of the 2011 PWG Membership Agreement and paid their dues.
The PWG Definition of the Standards Development Process Version 3.0 is
located at:
http://www.pwg.org/chair/membership_docs/pwg-process30.pdf
The PWG Policy on Intellectual Property and Confidentiality is located
at:
http://www.pwg.org/chair/membership_docs/pwg-ip-policy.pdf
Cheers,
- Pete (Chair MFD WG)
Peter Zehler
Xerox Research Center Webster
Email: Peter.Zehler at Xerox.com
Voice: (585) 265-8755
FAX: (585) 265-7441
US Mail: Peter Zehler
Xerox Corp.
800 Phillips Rd.
M/S 128-25E
Webster NY, 14580-9701
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