Hi Smith,
Thanks for uploading the correct clean draft to the FTP site.
Attached is your latest "-rev" MS Word version with all of the necessary
IETF RFC references added
(or corrected) and the US NIST FIPS references added. I also added a few
informative MS Word
comments for your use (please read them). I updated the Normative and
Informative References
sections accordingly.
Cheers,
- Ira
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On Mon, Dec 21, 2020 at 12:19 PM Kennedy, Smith (Wireless & IPP Standards) <
smith.kennedy at hp.com> wrote:
> Hi Ira,
>> On Dec 21, 2020, at 9:31 AM, Ira McDonald <blueroofmusic at gmail.com> wrote:
>> I downloaded the MS Word source "wd-ippepx20-20201029.docx" just now. My
> copy of MS Word 2019 cannot open it - says it contains "unreadable"
> content and
> suggests a recovery attempt - I didn't try it.
>> OTOH, the MS Word source "wd-ippepx20-20201029-rev.docx" does open OK
> without warnings.
>> I'm not sure what version of MS Word you're using or what OS platform.
> But the
> source of the eventual published version needs to be stable and readable
> for
> future maintenance.
>>> My local copy opens without complain on both macOS and Windows 10, but the
> one on the FTP site is broken. I am not sure why the upload got messed up
> but the SHA256 hashes of my local copy of "wd-ippepx20-20201029.docx" and
> the one on the FTP site don't match. I just pushed up a new copy and it
> loads as expected - try again:
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