[IPP] IPP WG Last Call: IPP Label Printing Extensions v1.0 (Ends February 13, 2020)

[Kennedy, Smith (Wireless & IPP Standards)]

Hi Mike,

These comments are late so I apologize for my tardiness:

Line 137-138: Replace with "And given the need to support label and receipt printers with IPP, this IPP Label Printing Extensions v1.0 should extend IPP by:"
Lines 139-141: Change the first word to be "Defining" or "Providing" to align with the first comment
Section 5.2.1: is it possible for there to be more than one label mode configured? If so, then "label-mode-configured" ought to be (1setOf type2 keyword).
Lines 290-291: Move the first bullet to the bottom of the unordered list? It seems like we ought to be conveying a preference for standard document formats over proprietary ones

Again, sorry for being late!

Smith

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    Smith Kennedy
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> On Jan 30, 2020, at 2:35 PM, Michael Sweet via ipp <ipp at pwg.org> wrote:
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> [This Last Call starts today, January 30, 2020 and ends at 10pm PST on February 13, 2020]
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> All,
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> This message starts the IPP workgroup Last Call of the IPP Label Printing Extensions v1.0 registration document, available at:
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> https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ipplabel10-20200130.docx <https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ipplabel10-20200130.docx>
> https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ipplabel10-20200130.pdf <https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ipplabel10-20200130.pdf>
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> This registration defines IPP attributes and values needed for common desktop, mobile, and industrial label printers.
> 
> All parts of this registration have been prototyped in the "LPrint" project:
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> https://github.com/michaelrsweet/lprint <https://github.com/michaelrsweet/lprint>
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> Please reply to this message with any feedback, which we can review at the following IPP workgroup conference call.
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> Thanks!
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