Hi Bil,
Nope - it didn't get lost and did get noted. There was just such a flurry
of responses Wednesday through Friday that Smih and I lost track a bit
in acknowledging them all.
Thanks for your response!
Cheers,
- Ira
Ira McDonald (Musician / Software Architect)
Co-Chair - TCG Trusted Mobility Solutions WG
Co-Chair - TCG Metadata Access Protocol SG
Chair - Linux Foundation Open Printing WG
Secretary - IEEE-ISTO Printer Working Group
Co-Chair - IEEE-ISTO PWG Internet Printing Protocol WG
IETF Designated Expert - IPP & Printer MIB
Blue Roof Music / High North Inc
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On Wed, Sep 11, 2019 at 10:53 PM William Wagner <wamwagner at comcast.net>
wrote:
> Some minor things. Line numbers refer to PDF.
>>>> line 791 “System Serviceand” should be “System Service and”.
>>>> Line 1754 “Note: Appropriate Subunits are automatically associated with a
> new Printer object based on “printer-service-type”, inherent System
> capabilities, (out-of-band)System policies.” Add “and/or” before
> (out-of-band)? Also, don’t understand following sentence. Also, seems to be
> missing “)” . Unintended font change?
>>>> Line 3471 “unique identier of the Resource” should be identifier?
>>>> Line 3684 section Error! 3684Reference source not found.
>>>> Thanks, Bill W.
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