[IPP] New "Initial Draft" of IPP Job and Printer Extensions Set 2 v2 (JPS2v2) posted

[IPP] New "Initial Draft" of IPP Job and Printer Extensions Set 2 v2 (JPS2v2) posted

Michael Sweet msweet at apple.com
Tue Aug 28 13:33:11 UTC 2018


I really appreciate you tackling this update!  Apologies in advance for the length of this editorial feedback (going through the same thing myself with the 5100.5 update):

- Filename should be wd-ippjobprinterext2v20-yyyymmdd.ext
- Title should be "IPP Job and Printer Extensions - Set 2 v2.0 (JPS2)
- Abstract appears to be truncated and probably needs some editorial love.
- The IPP workgroup boilerplate on page 4 should be removed (not in current template)
- Global: Change all "type3 keyword" to "type2 keyword"
- Global: Change "The 'foo' Something Something attribute" in the attribute descriptions to just "This attribute"
- Section 4 appears to have the "4." in the title twice
- Section 5 (REQUIRED OPERATIONS) should be moved after the attributes and renamed "New Operations" (for consistency with our current spec template)
- Sections 6, 7, 9, and 10 should be brought under a new section 5 "New Attributes"
  - Section 5.1 Operation Attributes
  - Section 5.2 Job Description Attributes (or Job Status Attributes since job-save-printer-make-and-model appears to be set by the Printer during processing and thus should be READ ONLY)
  - Section 5.3 Job Template Attributes
  - Section 5.4 Printer Description Attributes
- Section 8 (Additional Semantics) should come after Section 11 (Additional Values)
- Add new Section 8.1: Get-Jobs: which-jobs to talk about new which-jobs values
- Section 8.1: make section 8.2 Hold-Job: job-hold-until-time
- Section 8.2: make section 8.3 Set-Job-Attributes: job-delay-output-until, job-delay-output-until-time, job-hold-until-time
- Section 10.11 should be made a subsection of job-delay-output-until-time
- Section 10.13 should be made a subsection of job-hold-until-time
- Section 10.35 should be made a subsection of save-info
- Section 10.40 should be made a subsection of save-name
- Section 11: New Values for Existing Attributes (drop semantics here)
- Section 11.1: Drop "Printer Description attribute" from title
- Section 11.2: Just "which-jobs (type2 keyword)" - which-jobs-supported inherits everything from which-jobs
- Section 11.3: Drop "Job Description attribute" from title
- Section 11.3.x: Move to corresponding Job Template attribute definitions
- Section 11.4: Delete (part of MSN2)
- Section 11.5: Move to section 5.3 Job Template attributes under a new "media-col (collection) Extension" section.
- Section 12: Just "IANA Considerations", we don't need the Semantic Model registration stuff anymore
- Section 12: Should come after section 14 (Security Considerations)
- Section 12.1: Attribute Registrations
- Bring back the "Conformance Requirements" section (missing!) - it should go before the Internationalization Considerations section
- Section 13: Drop UTR20 (not needed for IPP and no longer being maintained by the Unicode Consortium...) and make sure you don't lose the advisory text from the current WD template - UTR17, UTR23, and UTR33 are informational (non-normative) so the SHOULD is not appropriate.
- Section 14: Use the standard boilerplate text for now.  We'll probably want to add more once we settle on the final content.
- Add an "Overview of Changes" section before the Change History section with an "IPP Job and Printer Extensions - Set 2 v2.0" subsection to provide a high-level list the changes in the v2.0 update.
- Add a "Deprecated Attributes" section after the "New Values for Existing Attributes" section (empty for now)

Once we get closer to prototype I'll work with you on the registration templates - they'll need a significant amount of work... :/

> On Aug 28, 2018, at 8:06 AM, Kennedy, Smith (Wireless & Standards Architect) <smith.kennedy at hp.com> wrote:
> Greetings,
> I have posted a new "Initial Draft" of IPP Job and Printer Extensions Set 2 v2 (JPS2v2). This was created using the published final PDF draft to ensure a start from the wording that was finalized. I have made a number of editorial changes that are all preserved in the -rev version in case there are objections. The primary set of changes involved moving all the Printer Description attributes out of sub-sections of the "Job Template" section to the "Printer Description Attributes" section.
>   https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippjobprinterext20-20180828.docx
>   https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippjobprinterext20-20180828.pdf
>   https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippjobprinterext20-20180828-rev.docx
>   https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippjobprinterext20-20180828-rev.pdf
> I propose using this as our starting point, but please chime in if you don't like how this was produced. I will separately post slides to facilitate discussion about the changes HP would like to see in JPS2v2.
> Cheers,
> Smith
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Michael Sweet, Senior Printing System Engineer

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