Hi Mike,
Sorry for not getting this feedback to you sooner. One minor quibble:
Lines 161 / 180 / 209: "This value MUST appear by itself." might be better expressed by adding the normative statement "If the 'none' keyword is specified by this attribute, it MUST be the only keyword specified." to the paragraph above it (lines 153-155, lines 173-174, lines 201-203).
I'm fine if we leave the document as is, too.
Smith
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Smith Kennedy
Wireless & Standards Architect - IPG-PPS
Standards - IEEE ISTO PWG / Bluetooth SIG / Wi-Fi Alliance / NFC Forum / USB-IF
Chair, IEEE ISTO Printer Working Group
HP Inc.
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> On Apr 3, 2018, at 1:12 PM, Michael Sweet <msweet at apple.com> wrote:
>> All,
>> This message initiates an IPP workgroup last call of the IPP Privacy Attributes v1.0 (PRIVACY) registration document, which can be found here:
>>https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippprivacy10-20180403.pdf>> This registration defines attributes for specifying the privacy policies of Document, Job, Printer, and Subscription objects. The "ippsample" project contains a prototype implementation of these attributes:
>>https://github.com/istopwg/ippsample>> Please review this document and respond to the IPP mailing list (reply-all to this message is fine) with any feedback you have for the proposed registration.
>> This last call ends on April 12, 2018 (the next IPP workgroup conference call).
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