Greetings,
Sorry I didn't get this feedback until now:
Page 10, Line 244: The IPP Document object should also be mentioned
Page 33, Line 547: Reference for "The IPP/1.1 specification" should be to RFC 2910, not 2911?
Page 33, Line 570: "according to the defined procedures" -> "according to the procedures defined therein"
Page 34, Line 581-583: Seems a little unclear without more description or references to where there would be more detail
Page 35, Line 596-598: These and any reference links to 5100.12 are basically self-referential and will need to be updated when this document gets finally ratified, as an editorial housekeeping step, right?
Cheers,
Smith
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Smith Kennedy
Wireless Architect - Client Software - IPG-PPS
Standards - PWG / Bluetooth SIG / Wi-Fi Alliance / NFC Forum
HP Inc.
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