Hi,
I've just posted another Internet-Draft of IPP over HTTPS Transport Binding
and
'ipps' URI Scheme to:
ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/draft-mcdonald-ipps-uri-scheme-15-20141027.txt
- plaintext Internet-Draft format (warning - contains explicit formfeed
characters)
ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/draft-mcdonald-ipps-uri-scheme-15-20141027.pdf
- PDF of plaintext w/ line numbers (review *this* one)
This document has already been accepted and posted to the IETF I-D
repository.
This document is parallel to, but does not update or obsolete, RFC 3510.
This version has many *minor* editorial changes since the previous version
and is based on requests from S. Mooneswamy (IETF reviewer), Barry Leiba
(IETF Apps AD), and IEEE-ISTO PWG IPP WG review.
Comments?
Cheers,
- Ira
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Change History
27 October 2014 - draft-mcdonald-ipps-uri-scheme-15.txt
Editorial - Kept "Intended Status" as "Standards Track", with AD
sponsoring, per advice of Barry Leiba on 22 October 2014.
Editorial - Revised Abstract to delete mention of submission from
PWG, per advice of S. Mooneswamy on 13 October 2014 and Barry Leiba
on 22 October 2014.
Editorial - Revised Boilerplate to reflect IETF standards-track, per
advice of Barry Leiba on 22 October 2014.
Editorial - Revised Introduction and Acknowledgments to say "This
document has been submitted to IETF...", per advice of Barry Leiba on
22 October 2014.
Editorial - Replaced "this memo" with "this document", per advice of
S. Mooneswamy on 13 October 2014 and Barry Leiba on 22 October 2014.
Editorial - Replaced [RFC2818] with [RFC7230] for HTTPS and deleted
[RFC2818] from references, per advice of S. Mooneswamy on 13 October
2014.
Editorial - Revised section 1.1 Structure of this Document to correct
list of sections per revisions in this draft, per IEEE-ISTO PWG IPP
WG review,
Editorial - Kept section 2.2 Abbreviations to become Appendix A, as a
compromise to request to remove entirely, per discussion with
S. Mooneswamy on 13 October 2014.
Editorial - Revised section 3 IPP over HTTPS Transport Binding to
delete (redundant) first paragraph, per advice of S. Mooneswamy on 13
October 2014.
Editorial - Revised section 3 IPP over HTTPS Transport Binding to add
reference to [RFC7230] for 'https' URI scheme in bullet (2), per
advice of S. Mooneswamy on 13 October 2014.
Editorial - Revised section 3 IPP over HTTPS Transport Binding to
delete (redundant) "reliable" qualifier of a TCP transport layer
connection in bullet (3), per advice of S. Mooneswamy on 13 October
2014.
Editorial - Revised section 3 IPP over HTTPS Transport Binding to
replace "TLS 1.2 [RFC5246], or later TLS version," with "TLS 1.2
[RFC5246] or higher version" in bullet (4), consistent with TLS
future-proofing in current HTTP/2.0 draft, per IEEE-ISTO PWG IPP WG
review, rejecting request of S. Mooneswamy on 13 October 2014.
Editorial - Revised section 3 IPP over HTTPS Transport Binding to
delete (out-of-date) reference to [RFC2910] in bullet (6), per advice
of S. Mooneswamy on 13 October 2014.
Editorial - Revised section 3 IPP over HTTPS Transport Binding to
delete references to Security Considerations in other documents, per
advice of S. Mooneswamy on 13 October 2014.
Editorial - Revised section 4.1 Applicability of 'ipps' URI Scheme to
delete references to Security Considerations in other documents, per
advice of S. Mooneswamy on 13 October 2014.
Editorial - Revised section 4.2 Syntax of 'ipps' URI Scheme to
replace out-of-date reference to [RFC2911] w/ [STD66] (i.e., RFC
3986), per advice of S. Mooneswamy on 13 October 2014.
Editorial - Revised section 4.2 Syntax of 'ipps' URI Scheme to move
conformance requirement out of "Note" and rewrite conformance that
IPP Printers SHOULD NOT *generate* 'ipps' URI longer than 255 octets,
due to known implementation bugs in many older IPP Clients, per
advice of S. Mooneswamy on 13 October 2014.
Editorial - Revisions section 4.3 Associated Port for 'ipps' URI
Scheme to move conformance requirement out of "Note", per advice of
S. Mooneswamy on 13 October 2014.
Editorial - Revised section 4.4 and References to change "MIME type"
or "MIME media type" to "media type" and "[MIMEREG]"to "[MEDIAREG]",
per advice of Barry Leiba on 22 October 2014.
Editorial - Revised section 4.6.1 to correct plural/singular
confusion, per advice of Barry Leiba on 22 October 2014.
Editorial - Deleted section 4.6.2 Examples of 'ipps' URI for Jobs,
because IPP "job-uri" attribute will be deprecated in the future, per
IEEE-ISTO PWG IPP WG review.
Editorial - Delete section 5 Applicability of this Specification
because it was redundant with conformance imperatives in section 4,
per advice of S. Mooneswamy on 13 October 2014.
Editorial - Kept IESG as change controller in (former) section 6 IANA
Considerations (since the document remains standards-track),
rejecting request of S. Mooneswamy on 13 October 2014.
Editorial - Revised (former) section 7.3 TLS Version Requirements to
replace "TLS 1.2 [RFC5246], or later TLS version," with "TLS 1.2
[RFC5246] or higher version", consistent with TLS future-proofing in
current HTTP/2.0 draft, per IEEE-ISTO PWG IPP WG review, rejecting
request of S. Mooneswamy on 13 October 2014.
Editorial - Deleted Appendix A - Summary of IPP URL Scheme, due to
ambiguity and for future-proofing, per IEEE-ISTO PWG IPP WG review.
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