Hi,
The plaintext I-D was submitted successfully to the I-D Editor without
having
to correct any typos. So the line-numbered PDF agrees exactly with the I-D
Repository.
Cheers,
- Ira
Ira McDonald (Musician / Software Architect)
Co-Chair - TCG Trusted Mobility Solutions WG
Chair - Linux Foundation Open Printing WG
Secretary - IEEE-ISTO Printer Working Group
Co-Chair - IEEE-ISTO PWG Internet Printing Protocol WG
IETF Designated Expert - IPP & Printer MIB
Blue Roof Music / High North Inc
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On Sun, Mar 2, 2014 at 3:17 PM, Ira McDonald <blueroofmusic at gmail.com>wrote:
> Hi,
>> Based on IETF Apps Area review by Alexey Melnikov.
>> I've just posted a new draft of LDAP Schema for Printer Services to:
>>>ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/draft-mcdonald-ldap-printer-schema-06-20140303.txt> - plaintext Internet-Draft format (warning - contains explicit formfeed
> characters)
>>>ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/draft-mcdonald-ldap-printer-schema-06-20140303.pdf> - line numbered PDF of plaintext - use this version for review, please
>> This document *will be* submitted to the IETF I-D repository tomorrow,
> when the I-D submission blackout for IETF 89 ends. Minor typos from
> the I-D Nits tool may be corrected tomorrow morning (in the PWG FTP
> repository versions as well).
>> This document was created by revising the original LDAP Schema for
> Printer Services [RFC3712].
>> Cheers,
> - Ira
>> ---------------------------------------
>> Change History
>> 3 March 2014 - draft-mcdonald-ldap-printer-schema-06.txt
>> Seventh draft - for IEEE-ISTO PWG IPP WG
> Global - updated publication and expiration dates in copyright,
> header, footer, and boilerplate.
> Global - replaced 'SHOULD not' w/ 'SHOULD NOT' for RFC 2911
> compliance, per Alexey Melnikov.
> Editorial - revised Abstract and section 1 Introduction to clarify
> that this document is an individual submission to the IETF by the IPP
> WG of the IEEE-ISTO PWG, per Tom Petch and IPP WG review.
> Editorial - revised Abstract and section 1 Introduction to clarify
> that this document obsoletes [RFC3712], per Alexey Melnikov.
> Editorial - added section 1.1 'Relationship to SLP Printer Service'
> and section 1.2 'Source of LDAP Printer Attributes' for clarity.
> Editorial - added section 1.3 'Sources of LDAP Printer Schema OIDs'
> to describe permanent delegation of "1.3.18.0.2.24.46" to the
> IEEE-ISTO PWG by IBM in October 2011, per Alexey Melnikov.
> Editorial - added section 1.4 'Rationale for Design Choices' for
> clarity.
> Editorial - revised sections 3.1, 3.4, 3.5, and 3.6 to delete
> erroneous SHOULD references to structural classes, per Alexey
> Melnikov.
> Editorial - revised section 4 to clarify reference to section 4 of
> [RFC4517] and forward reference to section 6 of LDAP Printer Schema,
> per Alexey Melnikov.
> Editorial - revised section 4 to add implementation note about
> compatibility with existing implementations of [RFC3712] and
> underlying string length limits in [RFC2707], [RFC2911], [RFC3805],
> [PWG5107.2], [PWG5100.13], and [PWG5100.14], per Alexey Melnikov.
> Editorial - revised section 4.4 to change SHOULD to MUST for
> conformance to [BCP47] for natural language tags, per Alexey
> Melnikov.
> Editorial - revised section 4.4 printer-natural-language-configured
> and section 4.13 printer-generated-natural-language-supported
> definitions to clarify that they refer to LDAP Printer in syntax
> DirectoryString (UTF-8), per Alexey Melnikov.
> Editorial - revised section 4.11 printer-charset-configured and
> section 4.12 printer-charset-supported definitions to clarify that
> they refer to IPP protocol values and that corresponding LDAP Printer
> attributes are always in syntax DirectoryString (UTF-8), per Alexey
> Melnikov.
> Editorial - revised section 4.20 printer-number-up-supported and
> section 4.35 printer-device-id definitions to add missing
> SINGLE-VALUE clause, per Alexey Melnikov.
> Editorial - revised section 4.35 printer-device-id to delete
> confusing and redundant note about ordering of key/value pairs within
> LDAP attribute values (since this is clearly explained in
> [PWG5107.2]), per Alexey Melnikov.
> Editorial - revised section 4 syntaxes of printer-uri,
> printer-xri-supported, printer-name,
> printer-natural-language-configured, printer-location, printer-info,
> printer-more-info, printer-make-and-model,
> printer-ipp-versions-supported, printer-charset-configured,
> printer-charset-supported,
> printer-generated-natural-language-supported,
> printer-document-format-supported, printer-compression-supported,
> printer-finishings-supported, printer-sides-supported,
> printer-media-supported, printer-media-local-supported,
> printer-resolution-supported, printer-current-operator,
> printer-service-person, printer-delivery-orientation-supported,
> printer-stacking-order-supported, printer-output-features-supported,
> printer-aliases, printer-device-id, printer-uuid,
> printer-charge-info, printer-charge-info-uri, printer-geo-location,
> printer-ipp-features-supported, to remove length restrictions in
> syntax and add textual notes instead about IPP compatibility (where
> applicable), per Alexey Melnikov.
> Editorial - added appendix A 'Changes since RFC 3712', per Alexey
> Melnikov.
> Editorial - added missing informative reference to [RFC3712].
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