Hi Smith,
The document title word order should be changed from:
"IPP/2.0 Implementer’s Guide"
- which implies that it applies ONLY to IPP/2.0 protocol version
to:
"IPP Implementor’s Guide v2.0"
- which implies that it spans all IPP protocol versions and updates
the previous RFC 3196
- note that the final syllable should be spelled w/ an 'o' rather than
the incorrect 'e' (notwithstanding MS Word's illiterate dictionary)
to match the title of RFC 3196
Also, the abstract says it's for IPP/2.0 which is NOT correct (it
also applies to IPP/1.1, IPP/2.1 and IPP/2.2 protocol versions).
Should change from:
"This document updates and extends RFC 3196 for IPP/2.0."
to:
"This document updates and extends RFC 3196 for all IPP protocol
versions."
Cheers,
- Ira
Ira McDonald (Musician / Software Architect)
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