Michael,
Line 232: I don't believe that a Printer creates or manages a
"Document". What seems to be described here is Job-Ticket and for an
IPP's scenario; indeed the "printer" creates and manages a Job-Ticket
that contains the description, processing and status information.
Line 274: I still find the word "control" strange in this sentence.
Would "manage" be a better word.
Line 406 and 411 and 575: Is the word "enumeration" supposed to be the
word "Enumeration" defined in the definition section?
Line 587 and 602 (and may be others): Service here, I believe, does not
correspond to the "Service" in the definition section; thus, should it
be "service"
Line 527: Since the words "with generic drivers" was not deleted; I
content there needs to be a wording change. It is not a "generic
driver". As it will always be, there is a device specific driver in the
print-stream somewhere; mostly likely within a printer or virtual
printer controller. Anyway, I believe the term "driver" should be
replaced with something else.
Line 656: Suggest: "IPP Everywhere aware Clients"
Line 695 and the new section 4.2.3.3: Is the word "service" supposed to
be "Service"
Line 714 to Line 721: I would like to suggest a table for like...
Table X List of TXT Key/Value Pairs from Most
Important to Least Important
For Access Info to Printer
For identify the Printer
For Capabilities and/or Printer Selection Criteria
For Legacy Printer Selection
Most
Important
--- To ---
Least
Important
"rp"
"UUID"
"Color"
"Product"
"txtvers"
"DUUID"
"Duplex"
"usb_MFG"
"priority"
"ty"
"Copies"
"usb_MDL"
"qtotal"
"Collate"
"usb_CMD"
"note"
"PaperMax"
"pdl"
"air"
"PaperCustom"
"TLS"
"Bind"
"adminurl"
"Punch"
"Sort"
"Staple"
Figure 1: Elsewhere (I did not check everywhere) you changed "IPP
Everywhere Service" to "IPPEverywhere Service" but not in the Figure.
Line 1369 and 1384: why was the phrase "so-called" inserted?
Line 1439, 1446, 1456, 1462: The section reference values are missing.
Glen
________________________________
From: ipp-bounces at pwg.org [mailto:ipp-bounces at pwg.org] On Behalf Of
Michael Sweet
Sent: Thursday, September 06, 2012 6:54 PM
To: ipp at pwg.org
Subject: [IPP] IPP Everywhere Review Draft
All,
After sifting through 153 comments (!) from 12 respondees, I have
produced a new draft of IPP Everywhere for review at Monday's IPP WG
conference call:
ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippeve10-20120906.docxftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippeve10-20120906.pdfftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippeve10-20120906-rev.pdfftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/lcrc-ippeve10.txt (summary
of comments with resolutions)
Enjoy!
__________________________________________________
Michael Sweet, Senior Printing System Engineer, PWG Chair
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