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Change History
20 January 2020
Interim draft – updates from IDS WG review on 9 January 2020.
- Corrected author and title metadata.
- Corrected title of HCDPP in section 1 Introduction and section 10
References (need URI).
- Revised section 2.3 Security Terminology to delete trailing “d” and at
end of section.
- Revised section 3.4 Design Requirements to change “5100.4” to “5110.4”
and correct spelling of “recommendations”.
- Revised section 6. HCD System Architecture to change “channel” to
“channel isolation”.
- Revised section 10. References to delete leading space in [BCP61], change
[XML] to [W3C-XML], change [XSD] to [W3C-XSD], and fix broken format of
[W3C-XSD].
- Revised section 12 Appendix A – Internet Protocol Suite to distinguish
which protocols “can be used in the Internet Protocol Suite” (non-IETF
protocols) from protocols “in the Internet Protocol Suite” (IETF protocols)
and also to change “is is” to “is” in Syslog subsection.
- TODO – Move all notes on inappropriate protocols for HCDs from section 12
to section 4 (when those subsections are added).
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