Hi Pete,
I have no further comments for the version 20120117 in addition to those
posted already.
Here are the comments against the new updated version (20120227) today:
Line 373-376 - It's not clear "a protocol" here is what protocol. Readers
need to do a lot of guessing here. It's any printing protocol? Or only a
protocol for cloud printing?
Line 360 - Please also reference the section number in RFC291 here - much
easier for readers not familiar with IPP to find.
Line 413 - Figure 7 caption still labels this element as "InsertSheet
Datatype". Same problem with Figures 9 -12, and Figures 15, 17-23.
Line 521 - It's not clear "that element" here means the PageRanges
PrintJobTicket element or a vendor extension that controls this feature.
Please reword.
Thanks,
-Nancy
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Services and Solution Business - US
Oki Data
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Email: Nancy.Chen at okidata.com
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