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--></style></head><body lang="EN-US" link="blue" vlink="purple"><div class="WordSection1"><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1f497d">Comment 1:</span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1f497d">Page 2, Line 36: Title here doesn’t match title in header or on cover.</span></p><p class="MsoNormal">
<span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1f497d">Comment 2:</span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1f497d">Page 7: The introduction section doesn’t really include any information about the MFD alerts document and it provides a way for vendors to easily extend the (formerly) printer-specific MIB and IPP alerts to include alert information about the other multi-function additions. There is a paragraph in 3.1 (page 9) that might be re-worded to add a little more information as well as the abstract. </span></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1f497d"> </span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif";color:#1f497d">Jerry Thrasher<br>
</span></b><span style="font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif";color:#1f497d">Senior Engineer, WW Corporate Standards<br>Lexmark International Inc.<br>501C14/035-3, 740 New Circle Rd, Lexington Ky 40550<br>
Office: +1 859 825 4056 Fax: +1 859 232 7628<br>thrasher(at)lexmark(dot)com</span><span style="font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1f497d"></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><br>
HOW TO RESPOND:<br>Send an email with *exactly* the following subject line format:<br>Subject: <Company Name> has reviewed the PWG MFD Alerts specification and has [no] comments<br><br>WHERE TO SEND YOUR RESPONSE:<br>
Please send your response to *all* of the following email addresses (replacing "dot" with '.' and "at" with '@'):<br><br>wims "at" pwg "dot" org (WIMS WG mailing list - you must be subscribed!)<br>
wamwagner "at" comcast "dot" net (William Wagner, WIMS WG Co-Chair)<br>blueroofmusic "at" gmail "dot" com (Ira McDonald, PWG MFD Alerts Editor)<br><br>Note that you must be subscribed to the WIMS WG mailing list to send email there - otherwise your email will be silently discarded.<br>
<br>Please do NOT simply reply to this note on the PWG-Announce list.<br><br>Note: The PWG Definition of the Standards Development Process Version 3.0 is located at:<br><br> <a href="http://www.pwg.org/chair/membership_docs/pwg-process30.pdf" target="_blank">http://www.pwg.org/chair/membership_docs/pwg-process30.pdf</a><br>
<br>Cheers,<br>- Ira (PWG MFD Alerts Editor)<br><br clear="all">Ira McDonald (Musician / Software Architect)<br>Chair - Linux Foundation Open Printing WG<br>Secretary - IEEE-ISTO Printer Working Group<br>Co-Chair - IEEE-ISTO PWG IPP WG<br>
Co-Chair - TCG Trusted Mobility Solutions WG<br>Chair - TCG Embedded Systems Hardcopy SG<br>IETF Designated Expert - IPP & Printer MIB<br>Blue Roof Music/High North Inc<br><a href="http://sites.google.com/site/blueroofmusic" target="_blank"><span style="color:#3333ff">http://sites.google.com/site/blueroofmusic</span></a><br>
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