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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Here are my comments to the System Control
Service specification:</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">1. Abstract, Line 18:</font>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">"The PWG Semantic Model Version
2" - There is no such specification can be referenced. How about change
to: "The PWG Semantic Model Version 1 has been evolved to extend..."</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">2. Line 19 - change "may
perfomed by" to "may be performed by"</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">4. Line 20-21 - "an independent
System element which resides above the elements..." describe the System
strictly in terms of XML Schema structure. Could we have more general
description in terms of modeling the MFD System object, or combine and
connect the two?</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">5. Line 222 - remove "and"</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">6. Line 225 - remove "T"</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">7. Line 236 - This section is
about SystemDescription, text about "SystemControlServiceDescription"
should be moved to section 7.2. By the way, the elements of the SystemDescription
group are not defined in the MFD Model and Common Semantics spec. Could
we have a table of detailed description for each element in this group?</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">8. Line 269 - wrong section reference.</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">9. Line 284 - "<service>ServiceStatus"
should be "service-specific Service Description"</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">10. Line 293 - text in RED should be
black.</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">11. Table 1 Mandatory System Operations
- </font>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">(1) ListServices is not defined in MFD
Model and Semantics - please provide detailed semantics for the operation
and parameters, e.g. ServiceSummary.</font>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">(2) GetSystemElement is unique for the
System, not defined in the MFD Model and Common Semantics, needs detailed
semantics for the operation and parameters such as RequestedElements and
System Elements returned; Does these include all elements in the entire
MFD system?</font>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">(3) PauseAllServices, RestartAllServices,
ResumeAllServices, ShutdownAllServices, StartupAllServices, PauseAllServicesAfterCurrentJob,
SetSystemElements are all System-specific, need detailed semantic descriptions
for operation and parameters.</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Regards,</font>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">-Nancy</font>
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Nancy Chen, PWG Vice-Chair<br>
Principal Engineer<br>
Solutions and Technology<br>
Oki Data<br>
2000 Bishops Gate Blvd.<br>
Mt. Laurel, NJ 08054<br>
Phone: (856)222-7006</font>
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<td width=40%><font size=1 face="sans-serif"><b>"Zehler, Peter"
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<br><font size=1 face="sans-serif">Sent by: mfd-bounces@pwg.org</font>
<p><font size=1 face="sans-serif">05/10/2011 09:32 AM</font>
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<div align=right><font size=1 face="sans-serif">Subject</font></div>
<td><font size=1 face="sans-serif">[MFD] MFD teleconference Thursday 5/12
3pm EDT</font></table>
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<br><tt><font size=2>There will be an MFD conference call at 3:00 PM EDT
(12:00 PM PDT)<br>
Thursday<br>
May 12. Below is the proposed agenda<br>
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<br><tt><font size=2>The meeting is held in accord with the PWG Intellectual
Property Policy.<br>
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<br><tt><font size=2>teleconference:<br>
Call-in toll-free number (US/Canada): 1-866-469-3239<br>
Call-in toll number (US/Canada): 1-650-429-3300<br>
Call-in toll number (US/Canada): 1-408-856-9570<br>
Attendee access code: (by request only, please contact me if you do not<br>
have<br>
it)<br>
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<br><tt><font size=2>Live Meeting:<br>
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<br><tt><font size=2>Link:<br>
<https://www.livemeeting.com/cc/xerox/join?id=PWG_MFD&role=attend&pw=Let<br>
MeIn<br>
<https://www.livemeeting.com/cc/xerox/join?id=PWG_MFD&role=attend&pw=Let<br>
MeIn> ><br>
URL: https://www.livemeeting.com/cc/xerox/join<br>
Meeting ID: PWG_MFD<br>
Entry Code: LetMeIn<br>
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<br><tt><font size=2>Agenda:<br>
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<br><tt><font size=2>1. Identify Minute Taker<br>
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<br><tt><font size=2>2. Approval of minutes from 2/24/11 meeting<br>
<ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/mfd/minutes/pwg-mfd-minutes-20110428.pdf<br>
<ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/mfd/minutes/pwg-mfd-minutes-20110428.pdf>
><br>
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<br><tt><font size=2>3. Agenda bashing<br>
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<br><tt><font size=2>4. Discussion of the MFD System Object and System
Control Service<br>
Semantics specification.<br>
<ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/mfd/wd/wd-mfdmodel10-20110426.pdf<br>
<ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/mfd/wd/wd-mfdmodel10-20110426.pdf> ><br>
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<br><tt><font size=2>5. Next Steps, MFD Face to Face planning<br>
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<br><tt><font size=2>Peter Zehler<br>
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<br><tt><font size=2>Xerox Research Center Webster<br>
Email: Peter.Zehler@Xerox.com<br>
Voice: (585) 265-8755<br>
FAX: (585) 265-7441<br>
US Mail: Peter Zehler<br>
Xerox Corp.<br>
800 Phillips Rd.<br>
M/S 128-25E<br>
Webster NY, 14580-9701<br>
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