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<br clear="all">Hi, Thursday (28 April 2011)<br><br>High North has reviewed the 27 April draft of the Copy Service and has<br>comments.<br><br>Cheers,<br>- Ira<br><br>------------------------------------------------------------------------<br>
<br> [Comments on 27 April draft of Copy Service]<br><br><br>Global - reference to MFD Model<br>- change "[MFD]"<br> to "[PWG5108.01]" (it's a PWG Candidate Standard)<br><br>Global - English usage<br>
- change "as being included in the yellow box."<br> to "by being included in the yellow box."<br><br>Line 22 - boilerplate<br>- add the following text and URIs:<br><br> This document is a PWG Working Draft. For a definition of "PWG<br>
Working Draft", see:<br> <br> <a href="ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/general/pwg-process30.pdf">ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/general/pwg-process30.pdf</a><br> <br> This document is available electronically at:<br>
<br> <a href="ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/mfd/wd/wd-mfdcopymodel10-20110427.pdf">ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/mfd/wd/wd-mfdcopymodel10-20110427.pdf</a><br><br>Line 172 - typo<br>- delete underscore from "enterprise-connected_multifunction device"<br>
<br>Line 215 - section title incorrect<br>- change "Naming conventions for Overall specification and this<br> specification"<br> to "Naming Conventions" (for clarity)<br><br>Line 225 - requirements reference<br>
- add sentence:<br><br> "This specification is based on common requirements defined in the<br> Multifunction Device Service Model Requirements [MFDREQ]"<br> (informative reference)<br><br>Line 235 - typo<br>- change "as out of scope:"<br>
to "are out of scope:"<br><br>Line 315 - Table 1 - typo<br>- in "CopyDocumentProcessingCapabilities" delete extra comma after<br> "Page Delivery"<br><br>Line 330 - text color<br>Line 358 to 359 - text color<br>
Line 370 - text color<br>- change "MFD Model and Common Semantics" from RED to BLACK text<br><br>Line 461 - document name<br>- change "MFD specifications"<br> to "MFD Model and Common Semantics specification"<br>
<br>Line 496 - typo<br>- delete leading SPACE from this paragraph<br><br>Line 497 - typo<br>- change "inter-operate"<br> to "interoperate"<br><br>Lines 498 to 499 - conformance requirement<br>- change "Clients may choose"<br>
to "Clients MUST"<br><br>Line 516 - missing conformance section<br>- add the following text:<br><br> 10.2.3 Job History<br><br> Conforming Copy Service implementations MUST retain every Job in the<br> JobHistory for at least 300 seconds (see section 7).<br>
<br>Line 529 - informal reference<br>Line 532 - informal reference<br>Line 535 - informal reference<br>- delete quotes around MFD Model<br>- add trailing reference "[PWG5108.01]"<br><br>Line 540 to 547 - text color<br>
- change references from RED to BLACK text<br><br>Line 540 - reference date<br>- change "April 26, 2011" to "April 15, 2011" (end-of-vote date)<br><br>Line 541 - reference URI<br>- add correct URI to CS version with April 15th file date<br>
<br>Line 561 - informative reference<br>- add for Section 4 Requirements<br><br>[MFDREQ]<br> "Multifunction Device Service Model Requirements", September 1, 2010,<br> N. Chen, I. McDonald, W. Wagner, P. Zehler,<br>
<a href="ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/informational/req-mfdreq10-20100901.pdf">ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/informational/req-mfdreq10-20100901.pdf</a><br><br>------------------------------------------------------------------------<br>
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