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Hi,<br><br>High North endorses the numerous comments already stated <br>by other reviewers.<br><br>In addition, High North believes that the apparent inherent<br>instability of the MS Word source document is a serious<br>long-term issue for the maintenance and revisions of this spec<br>
that will certainly be necessary after the remaining core MFD<br>imaging services are completed - especially given the new<br>attributes and operations that are anticipated for coherence<br>with Cloud Imaging WG and IPP Everywhere future multifunction<br>
specs.<br><br>High North requests that specific steps be taken to stabilize<br>this MS Word source document, for example:<br><br>- delete all figure titles and table titles, because they're<br> redundant with enclosing section titles<br>
<br>- delete all or most live cross-references and change them<br> to more durable *names* of sections (as future document<br> reorganization seems likely)<br><br>- delete all actual figures that are not strictly necessary for<br>
understanding the spec<br><br>- other changes that experts in MS Word may suggest<br><br>After this document is approved as a PWG Candidate Standard,<br>it's critical that *all* future updates can be issued with redlines<br>
- as Okidata has already commented, this document is far too<br>complex to review without redlines.<br><br>Cheers,<br>- Ira<br><br clear="all">Ira McDonald (Musician / Software Architect)<br>Chair - Linux Foundation Open Printing WG<br>
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