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</o:shapelayout></xml><![endif]--></head><body lang=EN-US link=blue vlink=purple><div class=WordSection1><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>Sorry, the links were wrong in the last message!<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>Many thanks to those who have laboriously documented problems in the MFD Model and Common Semantics specification. Many of the problems were a result of a strange MS Word action which replaced hyperlinks to certain pictures with the pictures themselves. This did not show up in my original MS Word file, but did in the PDF versions and the MSWord that Pete posted. I have gone back to my last MS Word version and believe that I have eliminated this effect (sometimes requiring removing the hyperlink).<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>I have also addressed Nancy’s comment and the other comments listed below, in the ways indicated. These have been format and typo fixes…Other items I have left for discussion. The updated drafts are at <o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'><a href="ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/mfd/wd/wd-mfdmodel10-20110222.pdf">ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/mfd/wd/wd-mfdmodel10-20110222.pdf</a> and<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'><a href="ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/mfd/wd/wd-mfdmodel10-20110222.docx">ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/mfd/wd/wd-mfdmodel10-20110222.docx</a> <o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'> (Unfortunately, line numbers are page number are somewhat changed)<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>Please keep the comments coming.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>Thanks,<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>Bill Wagner<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>Items considered are:</span><span style='color:#1F497D'> Reported Issues considered in MFD Model and Comon Semantics Last Call<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:135.0pt;text-indent:-135.0pt'><span style='color:#1F497D'>SECTION 2.2.1 page 22 figure 6 Primary interfaces is missing a line from scanner subunit to Email Out [fixed]<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:135.0pt;text-indent:-135.0pt'><span style='color:#1F497D'>Section 2.2.2 page 24 duplicate graphic of figure 7 on page 26.</span> [X problem]<span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:135.0pt;text-indent:-135.0pt'><span style='color:#1F497D'>Section 2.4.2 page 30 line 825 job produces 1 ton should be <b>job produces 1 to N </b>[Fixed]<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:135.0pt;text-indent:-135.0pt'><span style='color:#1F497D'>Section 3.2 page 48 line 1149 missing reference source</span>[X problem]<span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:135.0pt;text-indent:-135.0pt'><span style='color:#1F497D'>Section 3.6 page 60 line 1212 missing reference source</span>[X problem]<span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:135.0pt;text-indent:-135.0pt'><span style='color:#1F497D'>Section 3.10 page 70 line 1280 missing reference source</span>[X problem]<span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:135.0pt;text-indent:-135.0pt'><span style='color:#1F497D'> line 1282 figure 45 should be <b>figure 44</b></span>[X problem]<b><span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p></o:p></span></b></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:135.0pt;text-indent:-135.0pt'><span style='color:#1F497D'>Section 4.3 page 95 duplicate graphic of figure 62</span>[X problem]<span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:135.0pt;text-indent:-135.0pt'><span style='color:#1F497D;background:yellow;mso-highlight:yellow'>Section 4.3.1 page 102 10<sup>th </sup>attribute from the top, is annotation a instance of imposition, if not it should be added to the graphic [?]</span><span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:135.0pt;text-indent:-135.0pt'><span style='color:#1F497D'>Section 4.3.3 page 112 duplicate graphic of figure 73</span>[X problem]<span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:135.0pt;text-indent:-135.0pt'><span style='color:#1F497D'> Line 1644 References figure 73 but no graphic below the reference.</span> [X problem]<span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:135.0pt;text-indent:-135.0pt'><span style='color:#1F497D'> page 113 duplicate graphic of figure 74</span>[X problem]<span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:135.0pt;text-indent:-135.0pt'><span style='color:#1F497D'> page 114 duplicate graphic of figure 75</span>[X problem]<span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:135.0pt;text-indent:-135.0pt'><span style='color:#1F497D'>Section 4.7.1 page 129 line 1759 reference source not found</span>[X problem]<span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:135.0pt;text-indent:-135.0pt'><span style='color:#1F497D'>Section 5.1 page 132 line 1829 reference source not found</span>[X problem]<span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:135.0pt;text-indent:-135.0pt'><span style='color:#1F497D'> page 133 graphic missing caption Image Job Status Element</span>[X problem]<span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:135.0pt;text-indent:-135.0pt'><span style='color:#1F497D'> Page 135 Figure 84 caption not bolded [fixed]<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:135.0pt;text-indent:-135.0pt'><span style='color:#1F497D;background:yellow;mso-highlight:yellow'>Section 5.2.1 page 141 does imposition fulfill requirement for annotation programming</span><span style='color:#1F497D'>[?]<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:135.0pt;text-indent:-135.0pt'><span style='color:#1F497D'>Section 5.2.3 page 150 duplicate graphic of figure 94</span>[X problem]<span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:135.0pt;text-indent:-135.0pt'><span style='color:#1F497D'>Section 7.1 page 165 Figure 102 graphic shows up on this page but is referenced in the document as being on page 167</span>[X problem]<span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:135.0pt;text-indent:-135.0pt'><span style='color:#1F497D'>Section 7.1.4 page 167 line 2126 Scheduling of Jobs should be <b>scheduling of the service’s Jobs.</b> [fixed]<b><o:p></o:p></b></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:135.0pt;text-indent:-135.0pt'><span style='color:#1F497D'>Section 7.2.1. page 168 duplicate graphic of figure 103</span>[X problem]<span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:135.0pt;text-indent:-135.0pt'><span style='color:#1F497D'> page 171 duplicate graphic of figure 103</span>[X problem]<span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:135.0pt;text-indent:-135.0pt'><span style='color:#1F497D'>Section 7.3.1.3 page 183 line 2423 reference source not found</span>[X problem]<span style='color:#1F497D'><o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:135.0pt;text-indent:-135.0pt'><span style='color:#1F497D'> line 2424 acel<service>job should be <b>Cancel<service>Job [Not found]<o:p></o:p></b></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><b><span style='color:#1F497D'> <o:p></o:p></span></b></p><p class=MsoNormal><b><span style='color:#1F497D'>==================<o:p></o:p></span></b></p><p class=MsoNormal>Lines 913-915: ArtBox section indented too much [fixed]<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Lines 617, 1149, 1212, 1280, 1759, 1829, 1835, 2423: Bad references? [X problem]<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Tables 21, 28: Bad references? [X problem]<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='background:yellow;mso-highlight:yellow'>Sections 7.3.1.14, 7.3.1.15: I am not sure the suggestion to drop Hold/Release<service>Job is appropriate here, as we don't define required operations for any services. Better to just note the deprecation and then not require them in the individual service documents as appropriate.</span><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><b><span style='color:#1F497D'>=================<o:p></o:p></span></b></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Page 2 line 58: Title here doesn't match the front. [fixed]<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Page 2 Footer: Change all footers to 2009-2011.[fixed]<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Page 12 line 539: This sentence is restating the same sentence from the previous page<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>scope section....(remove) [fixed]<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Page 19 line 617: broken reference (there are 15 total broken references from a search<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>on the word Error! in the PDF) [X problem]<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Page 22 line 669: the word Hardcopy doesn't need up-casing. [where Hardcopy meant Hardcopy Document (defined term), the word Document was generally added. Also, except in boiler plate, the word “document” when referring to a specification was changed to specification, with Document referring to the defined term.]<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='background:yellow;mso-highlight:yellow'>Page 25 line 707: the words " more appropriately" are not necessary [Disagree- the System spec a does not exist at this time, so are not referring to an existing spec, just saying that this information is more appropriate elsewhere]</span><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Page 28 line 767: Content Regions should be Content Region.[fixed]<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Page 29 line 805: the acronym SDSF is used before it's defined, need to spell it out here<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>or move the definitions before. [fixed by removing statement]<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Page 30 line 825: "1 ton Documents"????[fixed]<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Page 31 line 868: No figure reference after the word Figure.[fixed]<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Page 33 line 901: double periods in sentence [fixed]<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Page 35 line 944: PDF file shows two RED commas in the sentence. [fixed]<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Page 38 line 989: Need a period, not a comma at the end of the line. [fixed]<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Page 40 line 1025: Missing (REF) which is in RED. [fixed]<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='background:yellow;mso-highlight:yellow'>page 41 line 1044: Table 4 has forward references listed in the description. [?]</span><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='background:yellow;mso-highlight:yellow'>General comment on description tables (many of the tables have either blank description<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='background:yellow;mso-highlight:yellow'>columns or blank reference columns....or both....unless the Elements are defined in this<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='background:yellow;mso-highlight:yellow'>document a reference needs to be included in ALL Element listings in tables.</span><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Page 77 line 1328 second to last table row: The description for Any is Extension point for status...<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>should be Extension point for OutputChannelStatus.[fixed]<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='background:yellow;mso-highlight:yellow'>General comment on the Description of the extension point Any....There is a very inconsistent<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='background:yellow;mso-highlight:yellow'>style of how these are described in the tables (some are blank, some just say Extension point, some<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='background:yellow;mso-highlight:yellow'>say Extension point for something and some say "extension point for vendor differentiation and <o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='background:yellow;mso-highlight:yellow'>implementation-specific extensions while maintaing interoperability) Suggest simply changing<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='background:yellow;mso-highlight:yellow'>all to Extension point for "exactly what they extend". [to be discussed]</span>Also the word "Any" is inconsistently upcased or not, sometimes all lower case sometimes upcased throughout the tables. [fixed]<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Page 77 line 1338: need a period at the end of the sentence. [fixed]<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Page 82 line 1365 last row in table: Example of the General comment on the Any extension point,<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>and Processor is spelled wrong. [fixed]<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Page 86 line 1387 row 12 of table: unnecessary period in third column, and odd character in forth. [fixed]<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Page 87 line 1401: period spacing mid-line. [fixed]<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Page 91 line 1428: double semi-colons[fixed]<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Page 91 line 1450: What's the star for?? [fixed]<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Page 93 line 1486: spacing of comma mid-line. [fixed]<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Page 93 line 1492: Section 0 reference (broken) [fixed]<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Page 94 line 1506: Sentence is split by the figure. [X-problem]]<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Page 100 line 1565 Resolution row: What's the star for?? [fixed]<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Page 107 line 1605: comma,period in mid-line[fixed]<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Page 113 line 1647: Why's the word (Copy) in the figure name?? (multiple instances) [refers to Service used for examples of Service Specific elements – changed to Copy Service Examples]<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Page 122 line 1704: Section 0 broken reference [fixed]<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Page 122 line 1706: Internal reference without the word section. [fixed]<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Page 122 line 1715: need period at the end of the line [fixed]<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Page 126 line 1735,1736: comma and period spacing issues (3 instances)<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Page 128 line 1744 StateReasons row: odd symbols in third column.[symbol means paragraph – changed to word “paragraph”]<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='background:yellow;mso-highlight:yellow'>Page 128 line 1746: Name of Counter Spec. is not complete. [typically use colloquial name rather than full title, but corrected reference]</span><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Page 130 line 1768-1804: Text is BLUE in the PDF. [fixed]<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Page 134: Table has odd symbols in column 4 and Counter spec name/REF are incorrect. [fixed]Symbols occur in many tables in the References column.<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Page 145 line 1923: period spacing issue[fixed]<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='background:yellow;mso-highlight:yellow'>Page 145 line 1924: the word Vendors is upcased...and why is ONLY a vendor extension point?<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='background:yellow;mso-highlight:yellow'>In theory it could be extended later by the PWG as well. [case fixed – but ?]</span><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Page 149 line 1947: word spacing issues on the line. All text should be Left justified not<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>simply justified. [bad spacing is x-problem - document normal text is fully justified- would prefer not to change]<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>page 161 line 2008: Specific example of table with no description and no references. [fixed]<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Page 167 line 2153: word spacing issues. [X-problem]<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Page 170: Blank page needs to be removed, and previously mentioned duplicate figure. [X-problem]<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Page 172 line 2190: missing period [fixed]<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Page 176 line 2262: merged un-ordered list items (Processing - ) is the start of a new list item [fixed]<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='background:yellow;mso-highlight:yellow'>Page 178 line 2311: Text in figure overlaps the figure content (CancelJob)[? Do not see this]</span><o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Page 180 line 2354: Double periods mid-line. [fixed]<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Page 186 line 2564: NEED NOT is NOT a compliance term... [fixed].<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Page 195 line 2920: NEED NOT is NOT a compliance term... (also occurs on line 2944,3013) [fixed]<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Page 199 line 3048: need reference for Counter spec. [fixed]<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Page 200 line 3110 and 3122: need periods at the end of the sentences[fixed]<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Page 203 line 3131 second and third to last rows of table: missing references and the "H"<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>should not be up-cased in MadiaUsedSheets. (also no reference column for this table) [fixed]<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Page 204 line 3142: Confusing reference to the Counter Spec. Is it 5106.1 or 5106.10?? [fixed]<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Page 205 line 3152: Same Counter Spec. reference issue as previous comment. [fixed]<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal>Page 206 line 3182 and 3185: Need a TM after 2600 in both citations of IEEE Std. 2600TM-2008. [fixed]<o:p></o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p></div><br />--
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