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</o:shapelayout></xml><![endif]--></head><body lang=EN-US link=blue vlink=purple><div class=WordSection1><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>Thanks Nancy.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>With respect to “Security Considerations” I inserted the text that Michael Sweet provided verbatim, which I had understood that you agreed to.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>Thanks,<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>Bill Wagner<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><div style='border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in 0in 0in'><p class=MsoNormal><b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'>From:</span></b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'> mfd-bounces@pwg.org [mailto:mfd-bounces@pwg.org] <b>On Behalf Of </b>Nancy.Chen@okidata.com<br><b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, February 23, 2011 12:57 PM<br><b>To:</b> mfd@pwg.org<br><b>Subject:</b> [MFD] Oki Data has reviewed MFD Model and Common Semantics and has comments<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>Added to all other's review comments -</span> <br><br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>Comment on Schema version 1.119 - the Scan Service does not have Document object in Job object. When did we decide to loose the document object(s) in Scan job?</span> <br><br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>Comments on the document -</span> <br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>1) Table 1 Terminology</span> <br><br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>ADF - need a period at the end of the last sentence.</span> <br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>Document - need a period at the end of the last sentence.</span> <br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>Saved Job - "A saved job can be" ? Is this an incomplete sentence or an undeleted text fragment?</span> <br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>Service - need a period at the end of the last sentence, not a comma.</span> <br><br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>2) Table 7 Power Monitor Elements</span> <br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>Wrong reference for PowerStateMessage: should be para 5.2.2 not 5.4.2</span> <br><br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>3) Table 43 </span><br><br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>Wrong description for "Compression" element: the description text "range of compression factors supported" should be for "CompressionQualityFactor" element</span> <br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>The text for Compression element should be: "the compression algorithms supported"</span> <br><br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>"Resolution" element: remove the * in front of "Resolution"</span> <br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>The elements of Resolution should be "CrossFeedDir", "FeedDir", not "Cross Feed", "Feed".</span> <br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>Description text for these elements are missing, or provide references. See Scan Spec 7.1.2.1.16.1 and 7.1.2.1.16.2</span> <br><br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>4) Table 45</span> <br><br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>change "rangeofint" to "range of int" in all occurrences in the table.</span> <br><br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>5) Some or many elements are missing description/semanitc text for many tables listed below. At least reference to the original document where semantics are defined should be provided.</span> <br><br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>-Tables 44, 49 (almost empty for elements of Document Format Details), 51, 52 (a couple of DataTypes are missing too), 53, 59, 60, 63, 64, 68</span> <br><br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>I know it's a lot trying to fill in the description of every element in the table. However, since the table is the only place for a very "terse" description of or reference to the semantics of every element, and the elements are common to more than one service, we need to make sure their semantics are not deviated further in future specs. This is the main purpose of this Common Semantics document. Please, unless the semantics is obvious by the name of the element, we need to provide the semantic description text or the appropriate references.</span> <br><br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>6) Table 65</span> <br><br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>ImagesCompleted and ImpressionsCompleted should be given "either/or" descriptions like it was done in Table 57.</span> <br><br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>7) Security Consideration</span> <br><br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>Are we all agreed to provide a boiler plate for this section to not only reference the existing IEEE 2600 standard, but also call out MFD model specifics that implementers need to consider in order to not only to comply to MFD Service Common Semantics, but also to the IEEE 2600 standard? I urge we do so.</span> <br><br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>Thanks,</span> <br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>-Nancy</span> <br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------<br>Nancy Chen, PWG Vice-Chair<br>Principal Engineer<br>Solutions and Technology<br>Oki Data<br>2000 Bishops Gate Blvd.<br>Mt. Laurel, NJ 08054<br>Phone: (856)222-7006</span> <br><br><br><br><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'> </span> <br><br><br><br><br>-- <br>This message has been scanned for viruses and <br>dangerous content by <a href="http://www.mailscanner.info/"><b>MailScanner</b></a>, and is <br>believed to be clean. <o:p></o:p></p></div><br />--
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