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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Comment on Schema version 1.119 - the
Scan Service does not have Document object in Job object. When did we decide
to loose the document object(s) in Scan job?</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Comments on the document -</font>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">1) Table 1 Terminology</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">ADF - need a period at the end of the
last sentence.</font>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Document - need a period at the end
of the last sentence.</font>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Saved Job - "A saved job
can be" ? Is this an incomplete sentence or an undeleted text fragment?</font>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Service - need a period at the end of
the last sentence, not a comma.</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">2) Table 7 Power Monitor Elements</font>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Wrong reference for PowerStateMessage:
should be para 5.2.2 not 5.4.2</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">3) Table 43 </font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Wrong description for "Compression"
element: the description text "range of compression factors supported"
should be for "CompressionQualityFactor" element</font>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">The text for Compression element should
be: "the compression algorithms supported"</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">"Resolution" element: remove
the * in front of "Resolution"</font>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">The elements of Resolution should be
"CrossFeedDir", "FeedDir", not "Cross Feed",
"Feed".</font>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Description text for these elements
are missing, or provide references. See Scan Spec 7.1.2.1.16.1 and 7.1.2.1.16.2</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">4) Table 45</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">change "rangeofint" to "range
of int" in all occurrences in the table.</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">5) Some or many elements are missing
description/semanitc text for many tables listed below. At least reference
to the original document where semantics are defined should be provided.</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">-Tables 44, 49 (almost empty for elements
of Document Format Details), 51, 52 (a couple of DataTypes are missing
too), 53, 59, 60, 63, 64, 68</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">I know it's a lot trying to fill in
the description of every element in the table. However, since the table
is the only place for a very "terse" description of or reference
to the semantics of every element, and the elements are common to more
than one service, we need to make sure their semantics are not deviated
further in future specs. This is the main purpose of this Common Semantics
document. Please, unless the semantics is obvious by the name of the element,
we need to provide the semantic description text or the appropriate references.</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">6) Table 65</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">ImagesCompleted and ImpressionsCompleted
should be given "either/or" descriptions like it was done in
Table 57.</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">7) Security Consideration</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Are we all agreed to provide a boiler
plate for this section to not only reference the existing IEEE 2600 standard,
but also call out MFD model specifics that implementers need to consider
in order to not only to comply to MFD Service Common Semantics, but also
to the IEEE 2600 standard? I urge we do so.</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Thanks,</font>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">-Nancy</font>
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Nancy Chen, PWG Vice-Chair<br>
Principal Engineer<br>
Solutions and Technology<br>
Oki Data<br>
2000 Bishops Gate Blvd.<br>
Mt. Laurel, NJ 08054<br>
Phone: (856)222-7006</font>
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