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<html><head></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space; "><div>Comments:</div><div><br></div><div>Lines 913-915: ArtBox section indented too much</div><div><br></div><div>Lines 617, 1149, 1212, 1280, 1759, 1829, 1835, 2423: Bad references?</div><div><br></div><div>Tables 21, 28: Bad references?</div><div><br></div><div>Sections 7.3.1.14, 7.3.1.15: I am not sure the suggestion to drop Hold/Release<service>Job is appropriate here, as we don't define required operations for any services. Better to just note the deprecation and then not require them in the individual service documents as appropriate.</div><div><br><div>
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