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</o:shapelayout></xml><![endif]--></head><body lang=EN-US link=blue vlink=purple style='word-wrap: break-word;-webkit-nbsp-mode: space;-webkit-line-break: after-white-space'><div class=WordSection1><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>Many thanks to Michael for his comments…they have been reflected in the text. Any more comments, suggestions additions or deletions? I would like to send this to Jim by tomorrow afternoon.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>Thanks,<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>Bill Wagner<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><div><div style='border:none;border-top:solid #B5C4DF 1.0pt;padding:3.0pt 0in 0in 0in'><p class=MsoNormal><b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'>From:</span></b><span style='font-size:10.0pt;font-family:"Tahoma","sans-serif"'> Michael Sweet [mailto:msweet@apple.com] <br><b>Sent:</b> Tuesday, February 08, 2011 5:46 PM<br><b>To:</b> William Wagner<br><b>Cc:</b> wims@pwg.org; ids@pwg.org; mfd@pwg.org<br><b>Subject:</b> Re: [WIMS] MPSA Security Article<o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><div><div><p class=MsoNormal>On Feb 6, 2011, at 12:56 AM, William Wagner wrote:<o:p></o:p></p></div><blockquote style='margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt'><div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>An updated version reflecting comments made during the February face-to-face is posted at :</span><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'><a href="ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/general/MPSA/Access_article_110205.pdf">ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/general/MPSA/Access_article_110205.pdf</a><span class=apple-converted-space> </span>and</span><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'><a href="ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/general/MPSA/Access_article_110205.doc">ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/general/MPSA/Access_article_110205.doc</a></span><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'> </span><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>This includes a short biblio and a set of survey questions.</span><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'> </span><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif";color:#1F497D'>Comments and corrections are solicited. It is our objective to finalize this information and send it to MPSA by 10 February so that it can be posted next weekend.</span><span style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p></o:p></span></p></div></div></blockquote><div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div></div><p class=MsoNormal>Comments (on the PDF version):<o:p></o:p></p><div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal>Page 3: At the end of the first paragraph under "Log Generation and Availability", you have "... is often required for security purposes, (audit log), sometimes with alerts ..." - I don't think you meant to put commas around the parenthetical "audit log"...<o:p></o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal>Page 3: Paragraph starting with "Although the most secure approach" doesn't finish the thought. I think combining the first two sentences makes it clearer, e.g.:<o:p></o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div><blockquote style='margin-left:30.0pt;margin-right:0in'><div><p class=MsoNormal>Although the most secure approach is for devices to continually send out log information to an external repository as events occur, this is often neither practical nor justifiable.<o:p></o:p></p></div></blockquote><div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal>Page 7: Question 6 is multiple choice, right?<o:p></o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal>Page 8: Question 7 could also be multiple choice for a, b, or c... My recommendation would be to break this into two questions: "If you are implementing logging, where is it kept?" and "How to you implement billing?" with "Logs", "Simple copy count", "other", and "not implementing billing".<o:p></o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal>Otherwise shaping up very nicely - thanks for working on this, Bill!<o:p></o:p></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div><div><div><div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-family:"Monaco","serif"'>________________________________________________________________________<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-family:"Monaco","serif"'>Michael Sweet, Senior Printing System Engineer, PWG Chair<o:p></o:p></span></p></div><div><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-family:"Monaco","serif"'><o:p> </o:p></span></p></div></div><p class=MsoNormal style='margin-bottom:12.0pt'><o:p> </o:p></p></div><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div></div><br />--
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