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<html><head><base href="x-msg://165/"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space; "><div><div>On Feb 6, 2011, at 12:56 AM, William Wagner wrote:</div><blockquote type="cite"><span class="Apple-style-span" style="border-collapse: separate; font-family: Geneva; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; orphans: 2; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-border-horizontal-spacing: 0px; -webkit-border-vertical-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-decorations-in-effect: none; -webkit-text-size-adjust: auto; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; font-size: medium; "><div lang="EN-US" link="blue" vlink="purple"><div class="WordSection1" style="page: WordSection1; "><div style="margin-top: 0in; margin-right: 0in; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; margin-left: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><span style="color: rgb(31, 73, 125); ">An updated version reflecting comments made during the February face-to-face is posted at :<o:p></o:p></span></div><div style="margin-top: 0in; margin-right: 0in; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; margin-left: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><span style="color: rgb(31, 73, 125); "><a href="ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/general/MPSA/Access_article_110205.pdf" style="color: blue; text-decoration: underline; ">ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/general/MPSA/Access_article_110205.pdf</a><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>and<o:p></o:p></span></div><div style="margin-top: 0in; margin-right: 0in; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; margin-left: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><span style="color: rgb(31, 73, 125); "><a href="ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/general/MPSA/Access_article_110205.doc" style="color: blue; text-decoration: underline; ">ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/general/MPSA/Access_article_110205.doc</a><o:p></o:p></span></div><div style="margin-top: 0in; margin-right: 0in; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; margin-left: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><span style="color: rgb(31, 73, 125); "><o:p> </o:p></span></div><div style="margin-top: 0in; margin-right: 0in; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; margin-left: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><span style="color: rgb(31, 73, 125); ">This includes a short biblio and a set of survey questions.<o:p></o:p></span></div><div style="margin-top: 0in; margin-right: 0in; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; margin-left: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><span style="color: rgb(31, 73, 125); "><o:p> </o:p></span></div><div style="margin-top: 0in; margin-right: 0in; margin-bottom: 0.0001pt; margin-left: 0in; font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; "><span style="color: rgb(31, 73, 125); ">Comments and corrections are solicited. It is our objective to finalize this information and send it to MPSA by 10 February so that it can be posted next weekend.</span></div></div></div></span></blockquote><div><br></div></div>Comments (on the PDF version):<div><br></div><div>Page 3: At the end of the first paragraph under "Log Generation and Availability", you have "... is often required for security purposes, (audit log), sometimes with alerts ..." - I don't think you meant to put commas around the parenthetical "audit log"...</div><div><br></div><div>Page 3: Paragraph starting with "Although the most secure approach" doesn't finish the thought. I think combining the first two sentences makes it clearer, e.g.:</div><div><br></div><blockquote class="webkit-indent-blockquote" style="margin: 0 0 0 40px; border: none; padding: 0px;"><div>Although the most secure approach is for devices to continually send out log information to an external repository as events occur, this is often neither practical nor justifiable.</div></blockquote><div><br></div><div>Page 7: Question 6 is multiple choice, right?</div><div><br></div><div>Page 8: Question 7 could also be multiple choice for a, b, or c... My recommendation would be to break this into two questions: "If you are implementing logging, where is it kept?" and "How to you implement billing?" with "Logs", "Simple copy count", "other", and "not implementing billing".</div><div><br></div><div>Otherwise shaping up very nicely - thanks for working on this, Bill!</div><div><br></div><div><div>
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