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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Bill,</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">I am fine with "<service>
applied only where Service was part of a term such as "Service Job<br>
Ticket".</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">With that, Section 5.3.1.4, Line 433:
"the <service>" should be "the Service" and Line
434: "<service> Capabilities" should be <service>
Service Capabilities which has not been captured in the terminology section
either.</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Regards,</font>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">-Nancy</font>
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<td width=40%><font size=1 face="sans-serif"><b>"William Wagner"
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<p><font size=1 face="sans-serif">07/21/2010 09:09 PM</font>
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<div align=right><font size=1 face="sans-serif">To</font></div>
<td><font size=1 face="sans-serif"><Nancy.Chen@okidata.com></font>
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<td><font size=1 face="sans-serif"><mfd@pwg.org>, <mfd-bounces@pwg.org></font>
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<div align=right><font size=1 face="sans-serif">Subject</font></div>
<td><font size=1 face="sans-serif">RE: [MFD] Requirements Document Last
Call Comments resolution</font></table>
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<br><tt><font size=2>Hi Nancy,<br>
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<br><tt><font size=2>Thank you for your comments.<br>
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<br><tt><font size=2>All comments have been implemented except:<br>
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<br><tt><font size=2>1. My understanding was that the requested
translation from Service to<br>
<service> applied only where Service was part of a term such as "Service
Job<br>
Ticket" .that becomes <service> Job Ticket because for, example,
there is a<br>
Scan Job Ticket but no Service Job Ticket. However, the term Service is<br>
defined as pertaining to any of the Imaging Services, and a phrase such
as<br>
"The Service scans the first sheet." would appear both appropriate
and much<br>
easier to read.<br>
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<br><tt><font size=2>2.<br>
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<br><tt><font size=2>Bill Wagner<br>
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<br><tt><font size=2>From: Nancy.Chen@okidata.com [mailto:Nancy.Chen@okidata.com]<br>
Sent: Wednesday, July 21, 2010 5:26 PM<br>
To: William Wagner<br>
Cc: mfd@pwg.org; mfd-bounces@pwg.org<br>
Subject: Re: [MFD] Requirements Document Last Call Comments resolution<br>
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<br><tt><font size=2>Hi Bill,<br>
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<br><tt><font size=2>A few more editorial comments:<br>
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<br><tt><font size=2>Page 2 and beyond - the revision Date (June 20, 2010)
at the righ upper<br>
corner of each page is wrong.<br>
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<br><tt><font size=2>Section 5.3.1.4<br>
Line 434: I thought we agreed that all "Service" should be changed
to<br>
<service>?<br>
Line 442: "Resource" is mispelled.<br>
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<br><tt><font size=2>Section 5.3.2.2<br>
Lines 473, 479, 481, 484, 485, 489, 490, 494: "Service" should
be changed to<br>
<service>?<br>
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<br><tt><font size=2>Section 5.3.3<br>
Line 501: change "PhysicalDocument TicketDocument Ticket" to
"Physical<br>
Document Ticket"<br>
Line 502: change "PhysicalJob Ticket" to "Physical Job Ticket
"<br>
Line 514: change "PhysicalJob Ticket" to "Physicalb Job
Ticket".<br>
Line 515: same change as Line 514.<br>
Line 519: remove duplicated "and" and duplicated "Document
Ticket"<br>
Line 524: change "Physical Document TicketDocument Ticket" to
"Physical<br>
Document Ticket"<br>
Line 525: remove dulplicated "Document Ticket"<br>
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<br><tt><font size=2>Section 5.3.4.1<br>
Line 541: extra '.' preceeding "Document"<br>
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<br><tt><font size=2>Section 5.3.4.3<br>
Line 551: "local client" should be capitalized<br>
Line 554: "User Client" should be "Local Client"<br>
Line 560: change "Job TicketDefault Job Ticket" to "Default
Job Ticket"<br>
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<br><tt><font size=2>Section 9<br>
Lines 684-685: change the color of text to black.<br>
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<br><tt><font size=2>Regards,<br>
-Nancy<br>
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Nancy Chen, PWG Vice-Chair<br>
Principal Engineer<br>
Solutions and Technology<br>
Oki Data<br>
2000 Bishops Gate Blvd.<br>
Mt. Laurel, NJ 08054<br>
Phone: (856)222-7006<br>
Email: Nancy.Chen@okidata.com<br>
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<br><tt><font size=2>"William Wagner" <wamwagner@comcast.net><br>
Sent by: mfd-bounces@pwg.org<br>
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<br><tt><font size=2>07/20/2010 10:21 AM<br>
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<br><tt><font size=2>To<br>
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<br><tt><font size=2><mfd@pwg.org><br>
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<br><tt><font size=2>cc<br>
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<br><tt><font size=2>Subject<br>
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<br><tt><font size=2>[MFD] Requirements Document Last Call Comments resolution<br>
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<br><tt><font size=2>The updated MFD Modeling Requirements document reflecting
the comments at<br>
last Thursday's call is at:<br>
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<br><tt><font size=2>The updated document is accessible at:<br>
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<br><tt><font size=2>ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/mfd/wd/lcrc-mfdreq10-20100720.pdf<br>
</font></tt>
<br><tt><font size=2>ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/mfd/wd/lcrc-mfdreq10-20100720-rev.doc<br>
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<br><tt><font size=2>I suggest that the un-redlined copy be reviewed.<br>
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<br><tt><font size=2>I will update the text comments resolution later.<br>
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<br><tt><font size=2>Thanks.<br>
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<br><tt><font size=2>Bill Wagner<br>
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